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Barry B. Longyear's now Writer's Workshop-I An Introduction to Fiction Mechanics Copyright ©
2001-8 by Barry B. Longyear
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| Table of Contents Excerpt: "A First Look At The Story"
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Science Fiction Writer's Workshop-I : "Write the book you were looking for when you first started writing."I used to look over my collection of how-to-write books: endless tomes on symbolism, artful punctuation, social change through fiction, and "Is it art?" Much of it was entertaining, but of little use in getting words down on that first page. The book I had been looking for would have contained some pretty basic information: What are the parts of a story? What does a pile of words have to be or do to become a story? How do I get to page one? How do I get out of my own way? What should a story's purpose be? Who am I? What am I doing here? When I finally managed to cobble together my own answers to the above questions, and after much practice, my stories began being published. About a year after that, magazine editor George Scithers, suggested to me that since I was so new at being published, I must be very close to what I had to learn to move from fooling around with writing to actually producing professional stories. There are a lot of aspiring writers out there who would like to know just that. Write that book. I wrote it, and there are numbers of pro writers today who got their start with SCIENCE FICTION WRITER'S WORKSHOP-I. _______________________________________________________________
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| ONE: A FIRST LOOK AT THE
STORY (read excerpt)
"A Story"
The Hook Backfill Buildup Characterization Motivation Plot Climax Conflicts, Problems & Plots Change Purpose Scenes Making The Story Science Fiction Making Yourself Scarce Summary Exercises TWO: STARTS "The Second Law"
"Untitled One" "SHAWNA, Ltd" "Project Fear" "The Magician's Apprentice" Critiques Exercises THREE: BACKFILL Dream Sequence / Flashback
Dream Sequence Ignorant Devices & Reference Flashback Parallel Running Scenes Lectures Critiques Exercises FOUR: OTHER PARTS Titles
Buildups Bright & Dark Moments Plants Endings Trailers Seams Exercises FIVE: POINT OF VIEW Narrative Form
First Person Narrative Second Person Narrative Third Person Omniscient Narrative Show & Tell Limited Third Person Narrative (Single Point of View) Limited Third Person Narrative (Single POV Per Scene) |
FIVE:
POINT OF VIEW (Continued) Limited Third Person
Narrative (Camera Eye)
Narrative Frames Narrative Tense Summary Exercises SIX: CHARACTERIZATION Some Thoughts On Approaches
Sources of Characterization Physical Description Sympathetic Characters & Identification Characterization Through Action & Dialog Quotations Saidisms Speech Tags: Who Is Speaking? Sentence Structure: How Is It Being Spoken? Body Language Vocal Expression Language, Dialect, Profanity & The Alien Character Change Exercises SEVEN: FATAL FLAWS "On Hold
"Dry Run "Please Give "Requiem For Spacemaster Jones "Then Darkness Again "The Gift "What Would Harry Do?" Critiques EIGHT: WHERE TO START: A METHOD Starting Points &
Initial Development
The Stewing of "Enemy Mine The Writing of "Enemy Mine The Rewriting of "Enemy Mine" #1 The Rewriting of "Enemy Mine" #2 The Method Adapted NINE: GETTING IT TO THE EDITOR The Slushpile
Where And When To Write Typewriters Typing Hints Five Cautions Manuscript Formats & Preparation Mailers Cover Letters Copyreading & Revision Formats Proofreading On Picking Nits REFERENCES
TERMS WORKSHOP SUGGESTIONS
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* I am asked often, "What ever happened to Science-Fiction Writer's
Workshop-II?" What I was planning on putting into such a work has now
been incorporated in The Write Stuff: Online Writing Seminar. By the
time I was finished with the material, it was too inclusive of writing
fields to be limited by a "science-fiction" title. _____________________________________________________________________________
CHAPTER ONE: A FIRST LOOK AT THE STORY Ever since our fur-clad ancestors gathered around a campfire or huddled in a cave to listen to a story, a "good" story had to contain certain things. What is it that can take a practical, no nonsense, day-to-day type of person (such as our ancestral hunters and farmers were) and have him sitting on the edge of his stump listening to tales of ghosts, impossible heroics, and outrageous superstitions? It is a mystery, except to the storyteller. The storyteller knows that the audience has pains, frustrations, disappointments, crushing doubts, and fears. And the teller of tales knows that the audience is more than willing to trade their lives of mundane, petty evasions for dream worlds of challenge, mystery, and adventure as seen through the mind's eye of the storyteller. Stories are lies; and the storyteller is a liar. But few think in such terms. Honest, hardworking people sit enraptured, willingly absorbing the lies, finding within them reflections of themselves and their views of the world; right defeating evil, the worth of an individual will, the triumph of justice, the spirits of both man and woman raised above the mean existence of everyday survival. In the storyteller's lies, they find a kind of truth. Perhaps not the kind of truth that is; but the kind that should be. During the story, the truths are lived; afterwards feelings of those truths remain, to be remembered and touched during reality's unceasing efforts to drive men and women into the futile mire of sameness. There is more that the storyteller knows to make the use of his skill profitable. There must be in the story a being of some sort that the listener can see, can understand, can become. And this being must be tested. Many spend their lives fearing and avoiding tests, confrontations, demands. This is why the creation of the storyteller must be tested, and must rise to meet that test. The courage, the loyalty, the love, the vengeance, and the pain we possess but pale images of, we see resplendent through the special truths of the storyteller. We feel that in some universe-the storyteller's universe-we could be not what we are, but what we should be. The storyteller's universe reflects our pain and tells us that we are not alone; it grapples with our doubts and questions and tells us who we are, or who we might become. And this is why, when the storyteller talks, everyone else stops their chatter and listens. A basic, elementary story follows:
Simply by
substitution, thousands of different stories can be told by using the
structure above. "A Story" is not the formula for all stories; there
are many other story structures. However, the tale above does contain
all of the parts of a story....
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