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Goblin War Opening Scene


This bit was trimmed in order to increase the pacing and tension of the first few pages.

Goblin war drums wouldn't be so bad, Jig decided, if the drummers could only stick to a consistent beat.  He flattened his ears against his skull as he walked to the cave mouth.  Brisk wind slipped through the gap in his cloak, making him shiver.  A faint crust of snow and frost covered the obsidian walls where the cave opened up to the outside world.

"What do you think it is this time?" asked Braf, as he walked to stand beside Jig.

"How should I know?"  The last time, only two days earlier, a young goblin named Trellak had been the one who started beating the drums.  Trellak had discovered a squirrel bone in his soup, which resulted in several slivers of bone lodged between his lower fangs.  In typical goblin fashion, he had immediately declared war on Golaka the chef.  It had been a short-lived war, though Golaka had baked a delightful batch of meat pies from what was left of poor Trellak.  "Someone probably stubbed his toe and decided to go to war against the mountain."

Jig winced as another drum joined the chaos.  This one beat faster than the rest, like the heartbeat of a frightened animal.  Which, Jig supposed, was appropriate for goblin drums.

"Grell's going to start slitting throats if this keeps up," said Braf.  "She gets awfully cranky when anyone interrupts her afternoon nap."

"Grell's always cranky," Jig muttered.  "She--"  His good ear twisted, tracking the sound of running footsteps crunching through the snow.  He started to reach for his sword, then changed his mind and stepped back into the tunnel, putting Braf between himself and whoever was charging toward them.

Braf picked up his own weapon, which had been leaning against the wall.  The chains on the end of the heavy staff rattled, and the spiked metal balls rang against one another.  A cross between a flail and a short staff, Braf's newest weapon had inflicted as much damage on Braf himself as it had on any foes.  Personally, Jig thought it worked far better as a musical instrument than as a weapon.

Still, Braf was an intimidating sight.  He was a head taller than Jig, and twice as broad.  He wore a coat made from a tunnel cat's fur.  He had made the coat himself, and it showed.

Traditionally, such a trophy would be worn with the animal's head as the hood.  Braf had gotten the whole thing turned around, so the poor tunnel cat had to spend its afterlife with its head bouncing against Braf's behind.


© 2008 by Jim C. Hines