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This excerpt is from chapter one of Heart's Revenge, a romance novel with some supernatural elements -- I think of it as a ghost story with a romance tied up inside of it. It takes place on one of my favorite places to go with my wife, who's also my collaborator: Ocracoke Island, off the North Carolina coast.

And the pseudonym I'll be using (but don't tell anyone it's me!) is "Julia C. Porter." Get all the info you want about Julia and the book over at Julia's blog!

Heart's Revenge was released by Five Star Books in May 2006 as part of their "Expressions" line.
You can order the book from Amazon.com or Barnes and Noble. The ISBNs are 978-1-59414-447-9 and 1-59414-447-8.



Heart's Revenge

Ella Simon was not the kind of person who saw things that weren't there. So when it happened for the second time on her drive south, she hit the brakes and pulled off the road. She'd seen something out there in the dark waters of the sound, on top of one of the submerged houses. Was that a person up there?

She'd been driving all day, hoping to get free from the ghosts she'd left behind in Boston. Her father. Steven. Her cold, empty apartment. Her stalled career. She needed to leave all those bad feelings and haunting memories back in the city, far from the strip of two-lane highway bordered by wind-blown sand that she was traveling on now.

Traveling, and seeing things that weren't really there.

The sun had come out again, and she was on her way past the black-and-white Hatteras lighthouse that still lit up the North Carolina coast. She'd just driven onto the rebuilt section of the highway that had been washed out in the hurricane when she saw the movement on top of one of the flooded houses in the sound.

I'm letting my imagination get away from me, she thought, and that's not like me. My nerves are shot from driving all day, and it's making me see things that aren't there.

The first time it had happened, she'd been crossing over the Oregon Inlet Bridge. The cold March wind had slammed into her car as she reached the highest section of the bridge. For an awful moment—a moment that seemed to last forever—she thought she was going to go over the side.

The dark waters of the Croatan Sound were on her right, far below her, and the whitecaps of the Atlantic Ocean were marching off in the distance on her left. The sun came out of the clouds just in time to nearly blind her with its brilliance.

The sudden blasts of wind against her car windows made her think of broken glass. When she regained control of her car a second later, she risked another look down at the water off to her left.

Flashing just under the surface of the choppy waves were faint lights, flickering orange and white. They looked like emergency beacons, or tiny explosions.

Impossible, she'd decided. It's just the sun, reflecting off the water. Playing tricks on my fatigued eyes.

And now, half an hour later, it was happening again.

Feeling like a tightrope walker on this narrow slip of land surrounded by water, Ella left her car. Tall and slender, she wore a faded pair of jeans and a Boston University sweatshirt that hid her figure in a way that she always liked. Holding her breath, she stepped onto the sandy shoulder of the new patch of highway.

She kept her gaze locked on the drowned house surrounded by driftwood and tree limbs, and then she saw the movement again. It looked just like a shadowy figure.

The figure—if that's what it was—moved in a strange, irregular fashion, like a beat-up flag or a tree limb blowing in the wind. But the wind had died, and none of the trees in the area were left standing.

A view of Silver Lake on Ocracoke Island, where Ella is heading.

Still squinting across the dark blue waters of the sound, she reached into the back seat and felt around for her binoculars. She found them after a few seconds of searching around her suitcases, computers, scuba gear, and other equipment. She didn't dare take her eyes off the battered roof three hundred yards out in the sound.

There's got to be a reasonable, logical explanation for this, she told herself. But that didn't stop her heart from pounding out of control. She still held her breath, as if she were afraid to let the air out of her lungs.

She brought the binoculars up to her eyes in one quick movement. Even when she focused the binoculars, she still couldn't see the figure clearly.

But it was a person, without a doubt. Whoever it was, the person was big, and covered in shadows like a robe.

The figure seemed to almost float through the air as it leapt and spun to some silent melody. Ella could barely keep up with its movements as the dark figure danced to the edge of the roof, and then danced back.

He was dancing on the roof of the drowned house. The blurry man—she was pretty sure it was a man, not a woman—looked deformed somehow, but she couldn't focus on him long enough to figure out what was wrong with him.

And then she realized that the person out there was missing his head.

Continued...


 

 

The cover!


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What the critics are saying:

  • HEART’S REVENGE is a fast paced mystery with a romantic element.  Honestly, I was more interested in reading about the ghosts than Ella and Mitch’s romantic involvement.  I just couldn’t wait for Ella to get back into the water to see what the ghosts would do next. The ghosts capture your attention the moment they enter the narrative ... If you are looking for a good page turning mystery, I recommend that you give HEART’S REVENGE a try.
    — Anthonette Dotson, Romance Reviews Today

  • This is a story that kept this reviewer riveted.  The ghost story was very interesting and the whole plot was exciting and captivating.  There was never a dull moment wondering what the ghosts would be up to next.  The main characters are well written.  The dialogue is lively as they battle their differences.  The secondary characters gave charm and depth to the story and the struggling romance between Ella and Mitch was sweet. 
    Valerie, Love Romances

  • HEART'S REVENGE is an interesting horror romance starring two likable seemingly opposite humans chased by mean-spirited ghosts and the dreaded tourists. From the onset when Ella while driving sees strange sights until the final twisted confrontation with Blackbeard, readers will wonder whether the lead couple will survive and end up together ... Fans of an interesting ghost story enhanced by romance will want to read Julia C. Porter's tale of long dead pirates riding the high seas.
    — Harriet Klausner, Midwest Book Review