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The Devil and Deep Space
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Introduction

In an earlier draft of the Devil and Deep Space there are scenes which didn't last to the current draft. Some of the scenes we presented in December for the background they contained; here are the balance of the scenes that I can pick out that I hope might be interesting.

I need to remark that the way in which the action unfolded in the current draft is different from the previous draft, so these scenes are good only for background information and general characterization; the story's changed. At the same time, however, things about the story have remained the same, and this material may contain spoilers for the version of Devil and Deep Space that will see print in October of this year (yikes! That's nine months from now!).

The other disclaimer that I need to make is that the previous draft of The Devil and Deep Space refers to a previous draft of Hour of Judgment. So in a sense you're looking at a species of alternate history here - one in which Garol Vogel faked an assassination attempt on Andrej Koscuisko in Port Burkhayden to cover for the murder of Captain Lowden.

With all of those disclaimers in place, I hope that this material repays your time spent in reading it.

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The Text

The action of this scene — Cousin Stanoczk coming to the Matredonat to call Andrej to his family at Chelatring Side —is completely out the window in the current draft. I include it here because I liked the interaction between Lek and Andrej's son Anton, and there's a bit of background on the entire Andrej-Marana-Stanoczk inter-relationship that might be interesting.

I have to warn you, of course, that the actual plot mechanics are almost entirely changed between here and the current draft (it's not even wintertime, in the novel). Please read this scene as a genuine interaction between Lek and Anton that could easily have been in the current draft if not for space, pick up a few odds and ends about the relationship between Cousin Stanoczk and Andrej and Marana, make a minor note or two about the Malcontent in general, and enjoy the scene.TOP

It was raining, and had been raining since just past exercise this morning. A shame, because his gentlemen were beginning to rather enjoy riding; or at least they were coming to dislike it less and less intensely, so that he had their company and their good-will alike. Not that they ever withheld their dutiful companionship from him; they never had. A man could tell, even so. There was a certain involuntary stiffness of the body that could not be disguised or explained away.

Since it was raining, they were all indoors, and he could indulge in the luxury of his son's presence while he was going over his work-papers. No company was expected; the rains were setting in, and people either had work to do or sense to go inside. There had been an unusual trend in the current of the coastal waters, this past year-so he had been told. They had enjoyed a good flood in the spring, but the rains had never quite gone in some of the littoral regions, so that the growing season had been risky in places. Grain went to rot, when there was too much rain if the temperature stayed too warm throughout. When the grain went to rot it had to be destroyed-or processed into pharmaceuticals, which was much the same thing, for traditional folk.

Andrej Koscuisko sat at the huge old work-station in the master's library of the Matredonat reviewing documentation, signing acknowledgments. There was a full service of hot rhyti at his elbow, and a dish of sweetcakes besides, with one of the innumerable "great-aunts" without whom such a house could not function stationed at the wall to keep an anxious eye on his appetite and the temperature of the rhyti alike. Across the great room the fire sang in its niche, and sitting on the knotted rug in front of the fire-niche his son turned pages in one of his books, pointing out the images to Kerenko with an intensity of concentration that made Andrej want to laugh. Kerenko himself was lying on the rug, quite unselfconsciously, propping himself up on one elbow as he bent his dark head together with Anton's fair one over the leaves of Anton's riddle-book.

"I have clothing made from straw." Anton's pronunciation of the Standard was careful and precise, stumbling just a little over the sounds that were most difficult for Aznir to reproduce in Standard. Flat vowels in general. Semi-vowels in particular, which sometimes still flipped in Andrej's own mouth so that their opposite came out. "My dog likes to eat roasted-eels. My mother weaves the holy things from bark, and my house is made of branches. Where do I live?"TOP

Roasted eels were a difficult concept, for a little boy, because any intelligent child would know quite well that eels were like unto fish, and Anton knew as well as anyone that fish were not usually discussed with family retainers who were as close to strangers as Andrej's Security were. Even at that it was nothing compared to the difficulty that a man could have with fish when he began to reach that terrible testing ground, between his childhood and his first taste of the ocean.

"If your clothing is from plants, not animal skins, and your dog likes roasted eels, I think you must live on the shore of some water, somewhere. If your house is made of branches, instead of wood or stone, maybe it doesn't get very cold there." Kerenko was thinking hard. Or at least he was thinking out loud, leading Anton along a reasoned path to a conclusion, and not being obvious enough about it to insult the self-respect of an eight-year-old in the presence of his father. "I read in a book once that the holy mother of the Conner folk wears a bark dress, do you live in Conner?"

"No!"

The playful force of the denial caught Andrej, trying not to listen too obviously, off his guard. "Oh, I mean yes. You got it exactly right. But I couldn't live in Conner, isn't there rain all of the time? And wind?"

The Matredonat was octaves old, settled in stone and chinked with age over countless winters. The wind could blow all it liked; it could not penetrate into this room, although it raged against the tall narrow windows all along the western wall. The rain was captured in the house's drains and funneled off into the great cisterns, for the long dry days of summer when the water in the river could not be drawn out for the harming of the life within it. Fishes. Yes, indeed.TOP

"Oh, but you put on your rain-hat. And your cape is many layers of straw, so you stay dry. What's the next one, shall we go on?"

He had to complete his documentation before he could indulge himself in keeping his child company. It was very good of Kerenko to amuse Anton, because that way he could at least have the pleasure of listening to his son's voice while he worked. Anton's tutor would not be too stern with them; the exercises Kerenko and Anton were doing were part of the standard curriculum, an important teaching tool in the process of learning how to reason. How to think. How to consider the implications of a house made of branches, a dog who got roasted eels to eat, and an icon dressed in fabric made of woven bark, and speculate on how the elements might all come together in a specific place for a specific reason.

"You do it, you do it. It's my turn. Come on."

Marana was away in her own offices working on the kitchen schedule, consulting with the kitchen-master on what decisions had to be made for the next three weeks' worth of feeding a household this size. Stildyne had taken Taller and Smath and gone off with some of the House security, and Andrej was not certain but that had been rather hard of Stildyne, when it was so pleasant to lie on the rug and drink rhyti and listen to the rain outside against the windows instead of working. Ivish and Pyotr and Kerenko had been left to him. Ivish had found a text to read, over beneath one of the windows, while Pyotr was studying a schematic of the Matredonat with rapt fascination. There was something about his house that strained Pyotr's credulity to the limit; but Andrej had yet to identify what it was.

"All right, all right. My turn. Where are we? Oh. Yes. I have fine boots made with white fur inside and black fur outside. My dog likes to eat long strips of dried flesh, with grease smeared on them."TOP

Kerenko read slowly and carefully, so that Anton could follow the Standard of it in the text without difficulty. Andrej thought he knew this one. The long strips of dried flesh smeared with grease were a dead giveaway-but he was supposed to be concentrating. He thought he could hear people approaching, through the door at the far end of the room; he knew there were people approaching one way or the other, because he could see Pyotr's subtle in-gathering over the schematic, readying himself for whatever threat should come.

"My mother sews fine jackets with bone fastenings, and my house is made out of staves and skins. Where do I live?"

There were all sorts of people coming. Marana, looking a little annoyed, he thought. Someone behind her. Anton's nurse, bringing up the rear, and Andrej did not like to see Anton's nurse, because Anton's nurse could only be here to carry Anton away from him. Of course he could not protest, about that. He was expected to be working on crop indices and leading economic indicators in grain and related markets, not listening to his child work riddles with Kerenko.

"I'm sorry, Andrej," Marana said. "This has come to the door, and since it's raining-well, I had to let it in. It is your cousin Yemanichk, with a message from your father."

Stepping to one side as she spoke, Marana gestured in the direction of the man behind her, while the nurse hurried ahead into the room to sweep Anton up off of the rug and out of the room through a door at the other end of the room. Kerenko was standing up, taking his abandonment in good part; Andrej stared at the stranger, for a long moment, before he recognized him all at once.TOP

"Stanoczk!"

That was right, she had said cousin Yemanichk, he should have guessed it would have to be Stanoczk. Stoshi looked different, that was all, but he should have recognized him at once from the ribbon looped around his neck and the impudent grin that had always characterized him.

"Only if you say so, cousin. Respected and most senior of all cousins. Drushik, let me embrace you, you've got thin."

Marana had never cared for Stanoczk, but that was only traditional. There was a long-standing and hereditary antipathy between women and the slaves of the Malcontent whether male or female. It dated all the way back to the first slanders that hinted that St. Andrej Malcontent had been capable of suggesting the shockingly heretical notion that at one point in history the Holy Mother might have had a consort not far removed from the Canopy itself in power and prestige. The relationship between women in general and the Malcontent had never recovered from the impious hint that the Holy Mother might even once have been male. No amount of denial, reconciliation, persecution, or martyrdom had ever erased the specifically feminine resentment of that rumored blasphemy.

His cousin Stanoczk was as tall as he was, and built along the same lines. When they had been children they had gotten into mischief, more than once, taking each others' place, so that Andrej would take Stoshi's part in the sung-praise of the daily service in chapel while Stanoczk discoursed earnestly with visiting scholars about the battle of Kozabrun. Of course it was only Stoshi who had been beaten for the trick; Stoshi's family had not shared the progressive ideas that Andrej's own father had maintained in the delicate area of discipline for children.TOP

Perhaps it had been foreordained that Stanoczk would elect the Malcontent, even so long ago.

"I may have gotten thin, but you are very damp. Have you no better sense than to have come out in such weather? Grandmother. Brandy. And sweet-cakes."

Marana had settled herself at the work-table, folding her hands in a resigned manner. Giving Stanoczk one last affectionate hug, Andrej guided him to the table. Stoshi hesitated, and rolled his eyes in Marana's direction as if in petition; she smiled, as though she could not be truly disapproving. Then he relaxed, and sat down.

"At the direction of your father, dutiful son of the Holy Mother, generous patron of the least of her children, and prince of all the Koscuisko princes, I would swim to the Matredonat, cousin. -If I knew how to swim."

Once they had gotten past the cheerful irresponsibilities of childhood it had become more difficult to pass for one another. Those people around them upon whom they'd played such jokes had all learned, over time, to know that if the boy had dark eyes he was not Andrej Ulexeievitch, and that he was not Andrej Ulexeievitch unless his eyes were as pale as mercury. When Stanoczk's voice had dropped into his shoes the last of the joke had been lost; they did not even sound alike, after that, although it was only the pitch of the voice that separated them, and not any other obvious mark or habit of speech.

But Stanoczk belonged to the Malcontent.

Andrej had no interest in being mistaken for him now.TOP

He knew without asking that Stanoczk had no particular desire to be taken for the Chief Medical Officer of the Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok, with all that the post so lamentably entailed.

"You have a message," Marana prompted, a note of suspicion in her voice. But smiling.

"Indeed I do, Respected Lady." He had called Marana other things, when they'd been children. He had withdrawn into his persona now, however, more of a messenger, less of cousin Stanoczk. "Here I have brought a document in your father's own hand, Drushik. It is this, and I am sorry, but there is reason to ask you to Chelatring Side."

The great-aunt brought a flask of cortac brandy, with a plate of sweets to keep it company. Stanoczk signaled his thanks with a nod and a smile, and took three pastries in as many bites, hungrily.

"Of course I am to go to Chelatring Side," Andrej protested. "It has been decided. Once the Cloak lies in the Mountains, that is to say, several weeks yet, I believe."

He knew. He was to spend the greater part of his leave here, at the Matredonat, with Marana. With his child. And the longer he spent here at the Matredonat with his child the more difficult it became to believe that he would chose to die and be free of the black sin that defined his life rather than weaken and submit for the pleasure that he had in Anton Andreievitch.TOP

Shaking his head in rejection, Stanoczk took a mouthful of rhyti to clear his throat of crumbs. "There is a change. The Autocrat's Proxy goes to Chelatring Side, cousin Drushik, there are political matters and Selection issues, and your father asks that you will come. He says that he will not expect you to stay." Stanoczk's glance was suddenly quite sharp, and keen, and penetrating. "They are both of them much changed, had you noticed? Because of Burkhayden. Perhaps you should have had yourself attacked years and years ago."

Andrej knew what Stanoczk was saying; it was only by way of a mild joke. But it wasn't funny. He had been attacked, of course; it happened periodically. His parents had had nothing to trouble themselves about for as long as it had been because it was Security who had suffered for the attacks, and not himself.

"What is the Selection to do with my lord, or he to do with the Autocrat's Proxy?" Marana wondered, aloud. Andrej was grateful to her; she understood what Anton meant to him. At least he thought she did.

He also thought he knew the answer even before Stanoczk spoke. "Our mutual master, our cousin Andrej, is not just the inheriting son of the Koscuisko prince, Respected Lady. He has been a senior officer in the Jurisdiction's Fleet these nearly ten years, Standard, and the Second Judge-for one-has always honored his interests with particular attention."

Honored his interests, was it? Hounded him from Expiation to Atonement, from special assignment to special assignment, from the black horrors of the Domitt Prison to the cumulatively corrosive cruelties of Captain Griers Verigson Lowden, late of the Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok. "Honored his interests" was not even a joke. But Stanoczk was still talking.TOP

"And his rank, not to speak of the attention, make him much more interesting politically than he would be as merely the heir to a measureless fortune, vast estates, and the power of the entire Koscuisko familial corporation, Respected Lady. It is the Chief Medical Officer of the Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok that is invited to Chelatring Side to meet with the Autocrat's Proxy, and not exactly the son of the Koscuisko prince. But I have here for you also a message."

Addressing this last specifically to Marana, Stanoczk opened the front of his jacket and withdrew a documents-case with the seal of the Malcontent etched deep in its dull gray surface. Opening it with a peculiar gesture-the secures, Andrej guessed-Stanoczk lifted out a folded sheet of handtext, carefully, and placed it on the table in front of Marana. "And my instructions, Respected Lady, are to ensure that you yourself receive it. Here is one for you also, Drushik."

His note was only what Stanoczk had already told him, although it was unusual that his father had pledged to release him after the Autocrat had gone home. Less than ten days. More time to have with Anton. Refolding the document, tucking it away into his sleeve, Andrej looked to Marana for her news; and found her staring at the opened paper before her, pale, her eyes a little wide with disbelief.

"It is the end of the world," Marana said. "Oh, Andrej. It is the Day of Balance. Your father uses the familial form. He asks if I would condescend to receive him, at some time, here, at the Matredonat."

For a long moment Andrej could only stare in turn. After what he had done, his father addressed Marana with the familial pronoun? After his open rejection of the bride to whom his father had contracted him, his father wanted to make his morning-visit, after so many years of declining to extend his hand over his acknowledged grandson at the Matredonat?

Then his father had been more deeply troubled by the events at Burkhayden than Andrej had imagined.TOP

It almost made him feel guilty to have been so close to killed, since the force of the news of that event had proved so catastrophic as to redefine each propriety in his father's relationship with him.

"It is past time," Andrej said, finally, firmly. That was an obvious truth; as true as the fact that he had believed that the Romilaf River would flow from the ocean back up the rapids and into the peaks before his father would write, and in his own hand, using the familial forms, and ask to be received at the Matredonat. "They have let all of those years go by. And they were not even exiled in disgrace. It is well past time. Thank you, Stanoczk."

In return for such gifts he would even go to Chelatring Side with a good grace.

After all, the sooner he went to stand beside his father before the Autocrat's Proxy the sooner he could return to his son, here, and listen to him puzzle over boots and bark and roasted eels.

In the current draft this leave-taking scene came out a bit differently and is from somebody else's point of view, so I thought I'd go ahead and show it from Andrej's point of view here. The emotion of the event isn't much different in the current draft, but the current draft doesn't display this particular angle.TOP

Andrej dismounted, and lifted Anton down from his saddle with his own hands. Yanosh-Anton's groom-was here, of course, but there would be plenty of time for Yanosh to lift Anton down from his elegant little yowe. Anton was pale, but faced him with a brave smile that only reminded Andrej of how much he had lost, how much time he had wasted. How much Fleet had taken from him. "I need to go to visit at Chelatring Side, son Anton. I will only be a few days." He had tried to make his apologies last night, at Anton's bedtime. He had not allowed for the stubbornness Anton was apparently capable of-determination that Andrej had found himself unable to shake. How could it be so important to get up, to ride out, just to wave good-bye? In the end it didn't matter. Marana had been stubborn all of her life. He should have expected that Anton would have his way, with such a mother.

"You will come back, your Excellency?"

The yawn in Anton's voice did not disguise the dread that had inspired the question. Andrej had called his own parents Excellency, all his life; had his father ever wondered why he could not be "papa," the privilege of men with sons of lower rank? Truly it was a hard price to pay, even in return for the position that he had been born to.

"I will come back. You may depend upon it." In the long term of course he would not be coming back, not in any sense that really mattered. There was nothing that he could do to change the ultimate departure; all he had to speak to this time was the next few days, and to that he could speak honestly. "Now, kiss me, and go with Yanosh."

It was Anton's duty to kiss his father, there need be no special message in that. It was the desperate vise of Anton's thin arms around his neck that caused the real ache in Andrej's heart. "I will await your return, sir."TOP

He was Andrej Koscuisko, a man who-it was widely accepted-knew more about pain than most of even his peers in Inquisition. He should have more respect for the lives that he had taken than to stoop to so much as acknowledge their common grief. It was one he had himself created, for so many-real and permanent, and not of a mere handful of days.

Yanosh led Anton away by the hand, and Marana was standing beside him. "We both will await you. Sir. But it will not be so easy if you mean-what you have told me." So much she had forgiven him, so much she had granted him of comfort and compassion. The one thing alone she would not forgive him, and it was for Anton's sake that she would not forgive it, so he could not fault her.

"I will not have the courage to hold to it. If I had guessed how easy it would become to sell myself, all over again, I would never have risked so foolish a thing as to have come here." They'd been over this ground before; they both knew that there was no solution. She wanted him alive, for Anton's sake. He was determined that since Anton's father had not had the moral courage to understand freedom of choice when he had first come to know the obscenity within him that at least he could give Anton a father who had come to make a moral choice, whatever the consequences. "It is to be two days, three days. I hope I may be welcome once again, Respected Lady."

He could not ask her not to be angry. There was no sense of proportion in a mother's heart, when her child was at issue. "Welcome to Anton ever and always. I will not close my door against you myself."

Nothing left to say. He could not ask for anything more. Nothing left to do except to kiss her mouth and go.TOP

He hated going.

He did not want to die.

And yet who of the many who had died so horribly beneath his hand had had any less real and convincing reasons, to wish to live?

In the draft that my editor is working on right now, something similar to this scene takes place in a different context between Andrej and Jils Ivers much earlier in the story, and some of the information in this scene is completely out of context (sorry). I'm including it here for your Reading Enjoyment not in order to create confusion (for which I apologize in advance) but in the hopes that the additional Jils/Andrej interaction may be interesting to you. I don't think it's giving away any secrets to remark that Jils Ivers and Garol Vogel will continue to have a not insignificant amount to do with Andrej's future as the story moves on in future novels.TOP

Straightening from a formal bow to the retreating back of the Autocrat's Proxy, Andrej Koscuisko turned toward Jils Ivers with an expression which she could not quite interpret. It made her uncomfortable. Almost she wished to step back, to retreat; but that was ridiculous, and she knew it. She was more than a match for him physically, and if there was no one at Chelatring Side who was quite a match for the empathic intelligence that was one of Andrej Koscuisko's most effective weapons she could at least hold her own; or had been able to, at one time.

It was just that she had come to him as the enemy, before.

Reaching for her hand, Koscuisko made her an ironic little salute. The expression on his face had not gotten any more reassuring. "Specialist Ivers. Forgive me if I do not pretend that it is good to see you again." She didn't know what to do about being led about by the hand, with such grave courtesy; and the son of a Judicial assessor knew it, too, she affirmed to herself, with wry humor. "You do not take rhyti, if I remember?"

It was a mark of respect here in this milieu to lead her by the hand, to keep her arm trapped between his body and his elbow with his hand laid will-she nill-she on his forearm. To pull away from him or put any visible space between them would communicate disrespect-rejection of the honor offered-a message that she considered his rank too far beneath her status as a guest.

"Thank you, your Excellency, no. Kilpurs, perhaps?" Very well, she would not make any scenes. But she lifted her hand, fractionally, so that he would know how she felt about it.

Koscuisko raised an eyebrow at the beverage-tables with the towering chimneys of the old-fashioned warmers lining the inside wall near the formal chair of the Autocrat's Proxy. "It may prove to be so. What do you say, great-aunt, may we have kilpurs? And rhyti. Would it be kilpurs with a sourslice, Miss Ivers?"

"Oh, if at all possible," she agreed. She hadn't had kilpers at all since she'd left her shuttle in Ardibell Station to make her way here. There was no sense spitting at such small, but significant, creature comforts, when offered. "Sourslice. And I'll have a wafer, if there are any."TOP

The elderly servant, the "great-aunt," passed her an eggshell-thin dish with all of the adjuncts she could possible desire to accompany a glass of kilpurs arranged in careful order on its surface. There was an unanticipated side-benefit to all this, Jils decided. She didn't have to manage her resentment at being led by the hand if they both happened to have their hands full of glassware. "His Excellency has something on his mind?"

Koscuisko sighed, if very gently. "Neither of us is comfortable with our respective positions. I do not want to be here. I am not interested in whatever you have been sent to say. And yet we should probably pretend to dance amicably tonight, after dinner, since people will be watching, they have warned us. Have you ever the Dolgorukij formal-dances studied?"

He was being absolutely up-front with her; she found no trace of reservation or artificiality in his body language or his voice. "Somewhat." The idea have rise to a certain degree of apprehension; Dolgorukij formal-dances started with quiet sedate parades of one sort or another at one end of the spectrum, it was true, but developed very rapidly into sometimes challengingly athletic contests. "If they're to be darshan, you Excellency, it will be no problem. Because I won't be able to talk. So there need to be no conversation, in that case." She couldn't imagine anyone having the breath with which to carry out a conversation, in the middle of a darshan.

Koscuisko agreed with her, too, to judge by his quick smile. "Walk with me, Specialist, come over to the wall. Should we not understand each other?"

The other wall, he meant, the one with the rows of windows alternating with the warlike artifacts of Chelatring Side's military past and portraits of Koscuisko's ancestors. She wanted to keep him talking; if there was no conversation she had no hope of communicating with him.TOP

"His Excellency would prefer which Judge, in the Second Judge's stead?" she asked, walking with him as he had asked, careful to keep her voice neutral. Koscuisko frowned at his rhyti in a gesture that she recognized before raising his head to gaze into the painted eyes of Chuvishka Kospodar and answer as if at a recitation.

"I am an officer under Jurisdiction, Miss Ivers, you know that I have no opinion. -Anyone, except the Second Judge, whom I never expect to forgive for the Domitt Prison. You need not be concerned, Specialist, it is not likely that my feelings in this matter will make of a difference the slightest."

He'd been speaking Aznir Dolgorukij for weeks, now, at home. His Standard syntax was much closer to that of his milk-tongue than the precise Standard language she remembered him using. "The First Secretary is concerned, sir. Not that your personal convictions will damage the Second Judge's position, no." Not very well put. But Koscuisko showed every sign of taking her meaning as she had intended it.

Encouraged, she went on. "You may not care to believe this, your Excellency, but I believe the First Secretary realizes his previous attempts to influence his Excellency were a mistake. He has convinced me that he regrets them, sir."TOP

He didn't look much like his notorious ancestor; but they were all notorious. There was a shared semblance between Koscuisko and the pictures on the wall, but it was a faint odor of fire and blood, and the vaguest hint of the edge of a knife that carried the common line forward. Koscuisko had stilled into himself in a peculiar manner, his hands quiet, his eyes lowered, not moving, not speaking. He was listening to her. No, he was listening to her carefully, as if testing her assertions against the internal edits with which he was credited-Andrej Koscuisko's reputed 'truth sense." As if there was such a thing. And if there was such a thing, she fervently hoped that it was working, here and now.

"Where is the good in coming to say so after so much has passed? I do not say suffered, it is others who had to do that on my account, because of your First Secretary. Now that I have put myself out of his reach-"

Did she hear a word there, an unspoken word, formed in Koscuisko's mind, caught and cast aside before it was uttered?

"-he sends to say that he was wrong to have pursued me to such an end. It does not convince."

Skeptical, yes, but something else as well, something that she did not quite understand. Something that frightened her, and she was a Bench Intelligence Specialist, she had almost forgotten how to so much as spell the word fear. At least that was what her publicity said.

"He will demonstrate his sincerity by staying well clear, your Excellency. There is another issue that he wishes me to discuss with you, and from an independent viewpoint I'd have to call it a fairly critical issue, sir."

She couldn't quite tell if he was paying attention to her. He was looking up out the nearest window; there was nothing to see, there, but cloud and wall and rock. "You were sent to my family to discuss with them Burkhayden, Specialist?"TOP

Surely he knew that she had been. "At which time I had the pleasure of meeting your parents. Sir." And facing for the first time the true weight of traditional Dolgorukij culture. "I hope I didn't say anything that his Excellency might have preferred I not."

She didn't think she had. She'd been very circumspect about the entire issue of the gardener, as an example.

"It would have profited had I met your Garol Vogel years ago. Instead of permitting these Security to resist the very natural instincts of decent people to destroy the evil that they find among them." What was this about? He sounded almost amused. "Because there has been such a change in my father and my mother, since I have to home returned. I never hoped for my mother's blessing and my father's embrace, Specialist, and yet have had both. You seem to have done me a very great service, in your errand."

There was that. She had found the Koscuisko prince as stunned by the news as if it had not occurred to him that the post to which he had so determinedly sent his son could be physically dangerous. There had only been the few hours in which Koscuisko's life had been in actual jeopardy; the simple fact of there having been an issue in the first place seemed to have done the trick, then, as far as Koscuisko's parents were concerned.

He had his back to the wall, now, facing her with the window to one side of him and a set of ancient battle-armor on the other. He looked amused, and even relaxed-a little.

"Your Excellency." No time like the present to get her brief on Record, formally or informally. "First Secretary Verlaine believes that there may be some question of a potential irregularity on board of the officer's Command of assignment. If his Excellency should chose to request waiver, and renegotiate with Fleet, the First Secretary will not attempt to influence the outcome in any way. And if it should happen that the Second Judge is Selected, the First Secretary is willing to void his Excellency's continuation of service, at his Excellency's pleasure."TOP

She was extrapolating a bit from Verlaine's actual statements, true. But she was not extrapolating too far. She was a Bench Intelligence Specialist; she knew how to extrapolate-and she was comfortable that Verlaine would conform, should Koscuisko take her at her word. "It is understood that his Excellency might not have decided to request an extension of service had an abuse of influence not occurred."

Actually what Verlaine had said to her had been strong enough, coming from him. Koscuisko would know exactly what she meant, whether or not Koscuisko decided to believe her.

"Potential irregularities on board of the Ragnarok, Specialist?" He was looking across the room, to where his Chief of Security was waiting for him. "You would perhaps explain. You would like to sit down?"

She was more comfortable on her feet, where she could get a better look at him. "Thank you, no, sir. Had his Excellency left the ship before the training accident occurred?"

The great hall was emptying out, at this end. People were giving them plenty of room; privacy was the deepest sign of respect an Aznir Dolgorukij could bestow, in a place like Chelatring Side. Koscuisko frowned at something that he saw at the far end of the hall, but seemed to shake his attention back to her question. "Why do you ask?"

"His Excellency might not know. The Brevet Captain is dead." Might not be involved. Why should he be involved? As far as she could tell there was no plot on board of Ragnarok, although there was almost unquestionably a plot that involved the Ragnarok. TOP

Koscuisko's swift response rather surprised her.

"Brevet Captain Cowil Brem, I believe you mean. I hope you mean. The Brevet Captain ap Rhiannon is an interesting beast, I would be sorry to hear if she were dead."

Very well, he'd been on board, or at least he knew that much about what had happened. She should have known that ap Rhiannon would intrigue him. ap Rhiannon was a new sort of life form, from a physician's point of view, the product of a program of upbringing so unique that a crèche-bred child could hardly be said to resemble any other hominids under Jurisdiction in affect and motivation. And a good thing, too.

"Cowil Brem, your Excellency. There has been an audit team posted, and preliminary Findings. There are also some troubling discrepancies."

He had shifted his gaze to look long into the hall, the moment she'd said "findings." What was he looking for? What was he looking at? "Such as, Specialist?"

She could put him off; he had no special right to privileged information, just because he had struggled so-with ultimate success-against First Secretary Verlaine for so many years. If she did not put him off she would have to be responsible for the consequences. He was no Bench Intelligence Specialist, perhaps. But he was Andrej Koscuisko, and when it came to quickness of comprehension there did not seem to be much of a difference.

She missed Garol.

And she wasn't going to think about that.TOP

"It starts with the existence of a Warrant without Recorded findings. The dispatch of a prisoner transport to take custody of prisoners at Tenchenchuo-"

He had started to smile, around the eyes, as if he knew the joke of that already. How could he know? She had only just received the most recent word, this morning.

Declining to be distracted, she continued. "-when there were no prisoners at Tenchenchuo to take custody of." She did not need to mention Mergau Noycannir, not to him. Or not just yet. There was no way of knowing where Noycannir might have gone, no reason to suspect she might try to come to Azanry. It was Noycannir's personal involvement with Admiral Danil Sunnigan that gave the set of sequences their really questionable odor, however.

"So far you have told me only that there seems to be a plot against the Ragnarok. There are no particular irregularities about plots, Specialist, not in today's Fleet."

He was telling the plain truth. He should not. It was painful enough that Fleet was as corrupt as it had become. It only made it worse, to talk about it.

"Excellency, the Ragnarok has left Tenchenchuo space, and there are no orders on Record, anywhere. The Ragnarok has further taken the Recife vector-"

"For the Fleet Audit Appeals Authority at Taisheki," Koscuisko nodded appreciatively. "A reasonable move. In light of the conspiracy that you say may exist?"TOP

He would not say that he approved, not in so many words. He didn't have to. There was the glitter of the long teeth of a wolf, behind his smile, and that said more than enough.

"Major troop movement without leave is an irregularity. Failure to surrender troops under Warrant is almost-mutiny."

She hated the very sound of the word. Yet Koscuisko only smiled, and the wolf was grinning behind his smile, very horribly.

"Unless there are good reasons, of course. Necessary and sufficient reasons. You are telling me that First Secretary Verlaine fears for the loyalty of the Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok, and wishes me to feel clear not to go back to such a questionable position."

He certainly wasn't responding as she had expected. Perhaps that had been a mistake-to have expected anything, where Koscuisko was concerned. She couldn't help but wonder what it was that made him so discreetly cheerful about the troubling news that she had brought.

"If his Excellency chose not to return to Ragnarok while there are unanswered questions about the status of the Command, the First Secretary pledges not to try to touch his Excellency's life for his own ends. -Or for that of Judge or Jurisdiction," she qualified her statement, quickly, too aware of how easily Verlaine had rationalized his struggles of will with Andrej Koscuisko as a matter of policy, over the years, rather than personal pride. Vainglory.

Lifting his hand, Koscuisko gestured for a servant-a "great-aunt"-to come and take his empty glass of rhyti away. "If there were mutiny on the Ragnarok, Specialist Ivers-and I emphasize if-I would not wish to miss it," Koscuisko said. "No, please finish your kilpurs, and excuse me. I need to speak to my cousin Stanoczk."TOP

"His Excellency is surely aware of the problems with such a joke-" He should not have said it, since he could not have meant it. He had said it because he meant it. If there was mutiny on the Ragnarok he would not want to be left out. She could not think how to assimilate so shocking a statement, and sat down on the padded seat of one of the wooden chairs that had been placed beneath the windows, one by one.

"Miss Ivers." He looked her in the face, in the eye, steadily, with candor but without challenge. "You have been honest with me. I will be honest with you. There can have been no mutiny on board of Ragnarok, I am certain of it. But if there were to be-it is my Command of assignment, after all. I have become accustomed to its ventilation and even the Engineer. A man could do much worse than die with such souls as comprise that Command. In fact it is not impossible that it would be an honor."

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