Scenes from the Cutting Room Floor
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Introduction

These excerpts were originally sandwiched between the end of Chapter 3 and the beginning of Chapter 4 in the text of Hour of Judgment, and as such form a sort of ghost chapter. I suppose we could have held them for October (where ghosts are more appropriate) but the staff meeting scene looked a little light on the Scenes scale for me and I thought that anything I could do to provide a little extra distraction from the really depressing realities of our lives of late might not be unwelcome.

A lot of what's going on here on the surface (to the extent that there is a "surface" in a Koscuisko novel) relates back to Prisoner of Conscience, because Andrej was never the same after he left the Domitt Prison —and one would not think the better of him had he been able to internalize the experience of that place without reflecting some serious psychological damage. The general issues, however, will I hope be of interest to people whether or not they have read the previous Koscuisko novel.

Garol Vogel developed a certain degree of compassion with regard to Andrej Koscuisko very much against his better judgment and has resented it for the rest of his life (having compassion for Koscuisko, I mean to say, not his better judgment). Garol's primary problem is that he is, at heart, a fundamentally decent man, even though he is a Bench intelligence specialist. He'd be much happier if he could be either rather less intelligent than he is or much less keenly aware of the long- and short-range implications of what is going on around him. Wouldn't we all? 

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Andrej Koscuisko sat at his ease in the padded chair central to the torture-room, one boot resting comfortably against the shoulder of the man who lay cowering at his feet. Drawing at his lefrol with a sigh of contentment he admired his handiwork on the body of the prisoner who lay chained before him.

The prisoner had made him work for confession, but Andrej very much preferred it that way. Pain in itself was beguiling, true. But pain laid over defiance, to erode the will and enforce submission to Andrej's hand-that was even better.

And there was so much, here.

Cell after cell full of Nurail Borderers, hillfolk and townfolk, people with the stink of the herd still upon them, newly taken captive into Jurisdiction to slake the thirsty maw of the Bench with their blood-eight eighties of people, and more every day, till the Domitt was packed far beyond its capacity with wounded and dying.

The Domitt Prison.

"Please, can I go now?" TOP

The sound of that pleading was something to savor, and Andrej arranged the man's head with the toe of his boot so that he could enjoy it. The light wasn't good, but it didn't need to be. It was good enough.

"Well, I think so. We've covered everything I had in mind." He had the confession; he had the weave, written down in his book and tucked into his overblouse. His little book. There had been seven of them in the end, Andrej thought. Seven manuscript volumes full of dying weaves. He'd been interested. And once they found out he was writing them down they'd done what they could to give him what he wanted, defy him as they tried in all other areas.

But now he was alone, the cell was empty. There was nobody left in the cell. Someone had already come for the body, to tip it down the rubbish chute into the furnaces eight stories down. Andrej frowned. He'd promised the prisoner; he hated it when they took the bodies away before they were dead. He had agreed. He had promised to see that the man was well dead before his flesh was consigned to the furnace; he had to go catch them.

He rose to his feet.

The cleaning team, Nurail prisoners, were just outside, and the body they carried was quite decently dead. He wasn't sure it was the man he'd expected, but all seemed in order. Perhaps he'd been drunk. They had strict orders to be sure of the bodies before they destroyed them; why should he worry?

Because this was the Domitt-

Well, maybe he would go and lie down in quarters. He was tired, after all. The cleaning team saluted, and his Security bowed him politely through the halls; he went down the short corridor toward the lift that connected this floor with the roofhouse where he had his quarters.

He couldn't find it.

He knew what kind of dream this was, now, and he was annoyed at it. So predictable. Every door only opened into the next cell; he'd had this dream for years, he was almost bored with it. Sooner or later he would wake up: and when he woke up he'd be out of the Domitt. TOP

That was all he needed to do. Was to wake up.

He shook himself awake with a sudden start, annoyed at himself for having fallen asleep. It was smoking lefrols on top of hard exercise, it addled the wits and cut loose one's moorings. The prisoner was much too cowed to move a muscle, and Andrej gave the man's shoulder an impatient shove. He had perfectly good quarters to go to. He didn't have to take his naps in the cells. St. Clare rose to his feet gracefully, bowing in acceptance of the rebuke; what was Robert doing here? He'd not been at the Domitt. Captain Irshah Parmin had kept Robert back, and once Andrej had got here he'd understood. And he'd agreed. The Domitt Prison was no place for a Nurail, especially not for a bond-involuntary. There were too many Nurail here already. There could too easily be an error, made.

This was ridiculous.

He was just dreaming.

Standing up from his chair with stern determination he pulled open the black door to go into the hall. There had to be some trick he could use to break out of this. There were Security coming through the hall; he would enlist their assistance, he could follow them out once they had done what they'd come here to do. He knew these Security. He thought he knew them. He hadn't seen them any of them for five years, when the Bench had released them. What had happened to them? Why were they here?

He followed them into the cell, to be sure that he wouldn't miss his chance to get away. They were waiting for him. They had his prisoner, stripped and in chains, and St. Clare's face was bleeding. That was a start, but only the beginning, before they were through there would be so much more blood —

No. He was dreaming. He fled from the room and out through the door, but the door only led to another black cell, with another prisoner. Why shouldn't it? He was just dreaming. At least it wasn't St. Clare he was beating-but he knew the man, even naked and in chains. He'd only gone four-and-forty before. There was so much more that he could do now. TOP

It could not be St. Clare.

This was the Domitt, and Captain Parmin had not allowed St. Clare to go with him. Only a Nurail. Yes, that was right, only a Nurail, they all looked alike to him-

The whip was in his hand. St. Clare hung half-conscious in chains from the ceiling, catching his breath in great gasping sobs. His injured shoulder-Andrej called for them to take the man down and hurried in horror to cradle Robert to him, rocking St. Clare's brutalized body and weeping helplessly in bitter protest. Worse than just whipped, St. Clare had been tortured, and who knew better than Andrej Koscuisko what each raw burn and bloody welt represented?

He knelt on the ground with the shattered body of a Nurail in his arms. He hoped it was Ndisi. Had Ndisi been Nurail? What did it matter? And Ndisi could not speak, but Ndisi could not die, either. Ndisi belonged to him, and could not get away until he had given Andrej satisfaction.

He kissed the bitten mouth of the tortured man, forcing the obedience of Ndisi's tongue with the savage grip of his gloved fist, working St. Clare's shattered hand with ferocious pleasure. St. Clare cried for him, in agony that escalated into shrieks of purest pain; and Andrej was content, because Ndisi was his, and was never going to get away from him, now.

Never.

Never.

He was never going to escape from the Domitt Prison.

Why keep pretending he wanted to? TOP

There was a sound in the ship that shook Garol Vogel out of his drowsing dreams over the latest intelligence reports and onto his feet, out of the control area, before he had well awakened. He knew that sound. He was a professional, he had survived for longer than was usual for a member of an elite group of agents responsible for sometimes surprisingly dirty work, and he'd heard enough of sounds like that to know them immediately for what they were.

The shriek of a soul in agony, in uttermost despair-it had a higher, cleaner edge than simple physical torment, there was a sound that only helpless anguish could produce. The voice of a man who could not say what he was asked to say, who did not know what he was presumed to know, who could only suffer without any hope of a reprieve-

Back to the sleeping-cabins, seven of them on the courier. Straight into something solid, something immovable-a Security troop, one of Koscuisko's Security troops, and there was more of the same sort of noise coming from within the cabin in which Andrej Koscuisko had sequestered himself with his Security early on in transit.

Not so loud any more.

Muted and absolutely desolate, and Vogel knew that he wasn't entirely rational on the subject, but before the impersonal deities of uncaring Space any man who couldn't recognize that surrender when he heard it deserved to die, and the sooner the better — TOP

"Vogel."

Jils was in front of him, trying to get his attention, peering around the shoulder of the Security troop who was holding him cautiously at an arm's-length. Jils could hear it just as well as he could, what was the matter with her? She felt guilty about Koscuisko, she had a right to, but that shouldn't mean that she was willing to let Koscuisko take it out on his Security, whether or not they were just bond-involuntaries, whether or not Fleet didn't care one way or the other.

"Vogel, disengage, now."

Except of course that none of these poor bastards looked the least bit Dolgorukij to Vogel. And there was no mistaking the accent, the soft guttural clean and free from the hissing sibilants of the trade-version of the language-the beautiful cadence of the purest of all the Aznir Dolgorukij dialects. High Aznir. Nor any mistaking the words, either, so Vogel let them pass without recognition, not wishing to stop them for so much as a single instant in his mind.

Oh, holy Mother, please, what I have done. What I have done. And it is true, all true, please in the name of all Saints let it be not so, you weren't even there-how can Captain Lowden have sent you to this place when you weren't even there, I cannot have done this thing to you, Robert, I cannot have-

Vogel took his hand away from the throat of the man who was restraining him, a little surprised to see how serious he'd been by the whitened marks his fingers had left on the troop's neck. "Sorry," he muttered grudgingly, shaking himself to settle his uniform and his attitude alike back to where they were supposed to be. "Was asleep. Only just now waking up. I'd better go in." TOP

Jils was surprised now at his lack of tact, but Vogel didn't care. He could explain later. Security was going to be a problem, but he could deal with that.

"Sorry, sir, really not possible, sir. His Excellency's privacy to be respected, with the officer's permission."

Bond-involuntaries. Vogel hated the whole thing. Not even allowed to speak directly enough to make good sense. "Listen, do any of you speak the language?"

The troop took a step back toward the door, blocking it. But the sound from within the room was not sufficiently muted by the gesture for it to do Vogel any good. "Sir?"

"All right, I won't go in. Which one's Robert? What good does it do anybody, if you don't know what's on his mind?"

"St. Clare," Jils said. "Robert St. Clare."

Well, at least they were getting somewhere. "Beats him often, does he?"

The troop went white with fury. Vogel was impressed. "Respectfully request the Bench specialist take no further thought, no intervention is necessary or permissible-"

"No chance." No thought of such a cry as he had heard? "Stand aside, and that's an order, I mean a direct legal order. Lawful instruction directly transmitted to an appropriate party under obligation to receive and comply. Stand aside."

As long as they were going to be slaves anyway he was perfectly willing to take advantage of their programming when he had to. The troop staggered half-a-pace, clearly struggling with his governor; but the governor would win.

Won.

The troop stood aside to let Vogel pass, with a look of shame and self-reproach that Vogel really didn't need. TOP

"Hey, you can come too, I'm not going to hurt him."

Offering this privilege as a sop to his own conscience Vogel went through into the room. It was a mess. Three big Security holding on to one half-dressed Inquisitor as if for dear life, while the officer in question raved on in language that they clearly didn't understand from a sleeping-hammock in which they had Koscuisko securely wrapped.

"Excellency," Vogel said in his very best Aznir, going down on one knee to be close to the head of the hammock in which Koscuisko lay. He ignored the savage looks he got from the Security; maybe he had no right to be here, but he was here, and he'd had about enough of this nonsense. "His Excellency has only been dreaming, no harm has come to his Excellency's man. Be assured of it, sir."

No, please, no, please, open the door, there is a man alive in there, in the name of all Saints-open here, open-

It was just possible that Koscuisko had heard, and was answering him. Vogel even thought he could guess at what Koscuisko was dreaming: the furnaces at the Domitt Prison had been fed living flesh. Vogel pressed on, regretting having gotten so far involved as he had in what was-after all-none of his business. He should have listened to the Security troop, he should have just turned around and walked away.

Except that when he came to being able to turn around and walk away from pain like that it was time for him to turn in any pretense he had left to common decency. TOP

"Excellency, listen to me." He hoped he had enough of the basics left for Koscuisko to be able to comprehend what he was trying to say. Dolgorukij could be so elitist, about their language-"The furnaces have been cold for five years now. You are dreaming, sir. You shut the furnaces down yourself. No one has gone into the furnace since you put an end to the Domitt Prison, your Excellency, I was there. I promise you this."

The body quieted; Koscuisko lay still. It has been years, Koscuisko said, as if to him, as if no longer supplicating at the feet of some imagined tormentor. I did not check each one, I was afraid that they would guess what I meant to do. I did not check. The man was alive. And if I had only just checked. If I had only.

Vogel had seen the furnaces. He'd seen the excavations, too, and the analysis of the ash that had been used to lay the drainage-course for the Administration's new roads into and around the land reclamation site.

It had never come to him to see a man burned in a furnace who was not dead yet: for which Garol Vogel was grateful, if apprehensively so. There was no telling what the next assignment would bring.

If Koscuisko hadn't shut down the furnaces at the Domitt Prison, it would have been up to him and Jils to have done so; and he might be having Koscuisko's dream here and now. He was grateful to Koscuisko for having seen it for him.

Yes. That was the way to think of it. Grateful to Koscuisko for having seen that, in Vogel's stead. "No man can call back his past, your Excellency, but this one's over. Done with. Finished. Complete. The furnaces are cold. Whomever he was, he's long dead."

Koscuisko sat up, the horror of whatever he had been dreaming still clear in his face. But what is the club for, if not to open the furnaces? And Mevish. They are torturing him for sport. I must stop this, how can I be sure it will not be covered up? Chilleau Judiciary.

Vogel thought Koscuisko was awake, but he couldn't tell for certain. A species of psychosis presented in precisely this way, and a man couldn't tell if the sufferer was waking or dreaming. TOP

"The least of his Excellency's troubles is Chilleau Judiciary. Or." A mistake, he should not have said that, even in Aznir Dolgorukij, even if Koscuisko was too far gone to remember. He'd have to check the ship's monitors, make sure the record was erased. "Maybe not. Wake up, sir, you're dreaming. It's unnecessary."

He hadn't gotten to where he was by being clumsy enough to leave any such hints where somebody might find them.

"Go away, Specialist Vogel." In plain Standard now, so that everybody would know what he was saying. So Koscuisko was coming out of it at last, whatever it had been. "And don't come back until you can handle the gerund form without spitting it halfway onto the floor. It is disgraceful, what passes for good Dolgorukij these days."

Dismissed, and absolutely. Vogel could not resent it, not really, not when he had presumed so far as to get himself involved in the first place. Rising to his feet, he bowed a little stiffly; there really wasn't anything more that he could say, having said rather too much already.

Jils was near the door waiting for him. Pausing to look back as he went through, Vogel saw Koscuisko's Security help untangle him from the hammock, handling him as carefully as though they thought he might shatter at any moment.

Koscuisko was Dolgorukij, and in perfect physical health-else he'd never have survived the drinking that he did.

So it was Koscuisko's mind that Security was worried about: but it was none of Garol Vogel's business. TOP

He was just as glad that it hadn't been his job to break the news to Koscuisko about Secretary Verlaine's bright plans for his future.

— End —

Notes

Next month, we are introduced to some unusual Nurail Accounting concepts that have some interesting implications for young Anton Andreievitch (Andrej's son) several years down the line. Andrej Koscuisko goes fishing with a young Nurail lady, and a smolt may or may not result from the excursion.

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