Scenes from the Cutting Room Floor
Jennet ap Rhiannon
 Material pertaining to: Hour of Judgment (Avon, 1999), Susan R. Matthews
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Introduction

When the first draft of Hour of Judgment went in to my editor (the lovely and talented Jennifer Brehl) one of the things that was happening on board of the Ragnarok prior to its arrival at Port Burkhayden was the torture of a prisoner named Riveg Ndisi. This excerpt follows from one of scenes in Monolith/Captain's Mast and talks around that situation. I'm not going to post the torture scenes themselves because they don't tell us anything about Andrej Koscuisko that we don't already know. The following scene, however, had a lot going on by way of character development and placement that I rather enjoyed.

You might want to notice the bit of business here where Andrej has the Lieutenant read from the Record in Secured Medical. This may be an interesting trivial detail to remember when you read, The Devil and Deep Space, now in all fine bookstores.

You can expect to be seeing more of this creche-bred Command Branch officer as the Koscuisko story continues in other novels yet to come.

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It was quiet in the corridor outside Secured Medical, so Stildyne heard Koscuisko’s approach before the party cleared the corridor’s turning. Koscuisko and two Security: that would logically be Lek Kerenko and Pyotr Micmac. Koscuisko would not be expecting any company.

Stildyne bowed to his approaching officer, conscious of the Lieutenant waiting beside him making her salute as well. Koscuisko gave her the nod in return but fixed his attention on Stildyne.

"What is the meaning of this, Chief?"

Koscuisko had to look up at him; but the challenge in the officer’s pale gray eyes was untainted by any confusion over relative size as a measure of personal dominance or relative rank. Koscuisko was not tall. But Koscuisko was three times an autocrat, once in Medical, twice in Secured Medical, and three times in his birth and breeding.

Stildyne was just a Chief Warrant Officer in Security, a mongrel from nowhere with nowhere to go when his tour of service was up. Sceppan would be a distraction, but Stildyne knew that it wouldn’t be half the challenge that keeping after Andrej Koscuisko had been. Because there was no such thing.

"First Officer presents his respects, your Excellency." Now Koscuisko was to go home. Stildyne could hardly imagine what it might be like to have a home to go to. "Respectfully endorsing Fleet Lieutenant ap Rhiannon’s request for a brief orientation in Secured Medical for educational purposes. Sir."TOP

An orientation. Stildyne could almost hear the phrase repeated in Koscuisko’s clear tenor, suspicion dripping off every syllable. Koscuisko turned his head to confront the Lieutenant rather than mock her, however. They were much more of a size than he was. Koscuisko even had the advantage of height over the Lieutenant, and that was unusual, Koscuisko being somewhat to the short side of the Jurisdiction standard.

"What could possibly be of interest in a torture-room, Lieutenant? Tours are not usually on the agenda."

Koscuisko made the Lieutenant uncomfortable. Stildyne could sympathize. The instability in Koscuisko’s psychological makeup that made him so effective a torturer communicated itself to other sentient souls as something to fear, whether or not they were in any danger of coming under Koscuisko’s hand. Koscuisko’s own Security were afraid of him; and they had more reason to know than anybody how desperately Koscuisko was determined not to hurt them.

"I’ve never been posted to a rated warship, sir. And I was taught to be sure I knew what I was asking when I issued an order. I thought it was a good opportunity, your Excellency."

Something in what she said or how she said it caught Koscuisko’s fancy; Stildyne knew it from the sudden gesture Koscuisko made, cocking his head to one side and looking sidewise at her.

"H’mm. I cannot but endorse the instinct on principle. Come in, then, Lieutenant, you shall have hands-on experience here and now, and Mister Micmac shall show you how I wish the prisoner prepared for further Inquiry."

She looked a little startled at this. Stildyne was a little startled himself: but Koscuisko took the Lieutenant by the elbow and walked her to the cell-door, talking as he went.. TOP

"To give the order is as much as to do the deed, after all, Lieutenant. So you may watch, but you shall also work. Have you in torture-cell before ever been?"

Koscuisko keyed the admit, and the door opened along its diagonal. The Lieutenant shook her head. "There were confinement cells at creche, sir, but no such function on site. No."

"All to the good. It will all be new and interesting."

Something happened to Koscuisko when he went into a torture-cell, as the struggle in his soul between horror and hunger began to tip to the side of passion rather than revulsion. It made the officer a little drunk; and frequently very fey.

"Now. Here is a man, his name is Riveg Ndisi. You will note that he has been injured, and also that he is asleep. He and I have together completed the Sixth Level of the Question."

After which Koscuisko had performed emergency stabilization, and fed the prisoner enough drugs to keep him pain-free if unconscious until Captain Lowden made a decision as to the final disposition of the Brief. The prisoner had clearly not stirred since Koscuisko had left him yesterday at fourthshift. The fetters that bound him to the wall by his ankle-chains still lay neatly arranged at the foot of the sleeprack.

It was too bad that he was not to be permitted to lie quietly in his bed—meager though it was—and die of a hygienic overdose of a narcotic. But that was none of Stildyne’s business.. TOP

"Now Mister Kerenko and Mister Micmac would usually move this man into the inner room, for me. But you are here. Be pleased to take direction from Pyotr, gentlemen, proceed."

The inner room, Secured Medical proper. There was another way in to Secured Medical, on the other side of the inner chamber; a ready-room, with a washroom. Once Koscuisko had dismissed them Lek and Pyotr would go there to wait, and would make sure that the washroom had clean toweling on the warming-rack and clean linen waiting for Koscuisko when he changed.

Koscuisko had a horror of being seen with blood on his uniform. He was much happier when he could pretend that other people could pretend that they didn’t know just where he’d been, and what he’d been doing there.

Stildyne didn’t know why Koscuisko bothered, even so. It was the look on Koscuisko’s face that told the truth of where he had been, and there was no washing that horror out of Koscuisko’s haunted eyes, no matter how much time he took to try to set himself to rights before he left.. TOP

Koscuisko palmed the counterseal—it would only accept Koscuisko’s authorization, absent Captain Lowden’s direct intervention—and stepped through into Secured Medical while Pyotr guided the hesitant Lieutenant through the steps involved in raising an unconscious man to carry him to the torture. It interested Stildyne to note that though she clearly found the situation distasteful she neither shrank from the task Koscuisko had set her to nor refused guidance coming from a bond-involuntary.

Koscuisko went to the middle of the wall to the right of the room and crouched down to pull a floor-panel open, toggling some switches beneath the tile. The Wall descended from its storage-place, rotating as it tracked across the ceiling to come to rest in an inclined upright position on the floor. It was really more of a grid than a wall. And could serve as a table, when desired, but obviously Koscuisko wanted it standing, just for now.

Koscuisko didn’t bother with anything so tedious as instructions. His people knew what to do with a prisoner and the Wall. Strolling to the opposite side of the room, Koscuisko unlatched his drugs-caches and his equipment-racks from their concealed storage within the smooth white wall-panels of this sterile room. For the Lieutenant’s benefit, no doubt, Stildyne told himself. Ordinarily Koscuisko restricted the amount of time his people had to spend in the same room with instruments of torture: at least when he was thinking about it.

Since the Lieutenant was short and Pyotr’s partner Lek was not Pyotr helped a bit, the weight of the unconscious man’s body being too unequally distributed between her and Lek for efficiency. Once they had carried the prisoner through to the workroom, however, Pyotr stepped back, and gave directions with wordless gestures designed to communicate without drawing too much attention to themselves.

The Lieutenant bound the prisoner’s limbs to the grid with iron bands, watching Pyotr for approval, watching Lek. Matching Lek’s actions move for move. The Lieutenant set the straps and closed the vices, and although she stared for one long moment in disbelief and disgust at what Lek was showing her was to be done the Lieutenant set the clamps and tightened the screws as well.

If she hadn’t been creche-bred Stildyne might have acknowledged himself impressed at her self-discipline—if only to himself. But everybody knew that creche-bred lacked any real understanding that other hominids were people too, who by extension suffered. It was an artifact of their upbringing: the long years of relentless indoctrination, the single-minded focus on the rule of Law.. TOP

By the time the Lieutenant and Lek had finished their placement of the prisoner Koscuisko had found the drug he wanted. Standing by his chair, waiting for them, Koscuisko caught Stildyne’s eye; and winked. Stildyne knew the signs. The officer was well past his initial reluctance to face his Judicial function. The officer was beginning to enjoy himself, in anticipation.

The bond-involuntaries and the Lieutenant stood away from the Wall; Pyotr bowed, to signify that all was as his Excellency would wish. Koscuisko held up the stylus with the dose. "You are to put this through at the groin," Koscuisko told ap Rhiannon. "You know where to find the femoral artery? Very well. Proceed."

He was confusing her. Taking the stylus, she put the dose through a little awkwardly; but held it rather than returning it to Koscuisko, clearly uncertain about what she was being told to do.

"If his Excellency would entertain a question. Sir."

Creche-bred could be as formal as bond-involuntaries. Until Stildyne had met the Lieutenant he hadn’t realized that anyone could be as formal as a bond-involuntary. It made him wonder whether creche-bred were a species of bond-involuntaries at base; without governors, of course, or if creche-bred had governors it was the best-kept secret in Jurisdiction space.

"Thank you, Pyotr, Lek. I do not see my rhyti, if you hurry we can remedy that before my Riveg wakes up. Yes. Lieutenant." TOP

There was a raised platform in the middle of the room, and a large comfortable chair on that platform. With a side-table, where Koscuisko kept his rhyti while he worked, and where Security would set his meals out when Koscuisko did not care to interrupt an exercise to eat. The tabletop was bare: Pyotr and Lek hastened for the ready-room through the door at the far end of Secured Medical to take care of that problem.

The Lieutenant waited until they were gone to ask her question.

"Why the drug, sir. Given the Wall."

An intelligent question, really. It did her credit. Koscuisko smiled, nodding his head to indicate that he understood her confusion. "You take the drug for an instrument of Inquiry from the Controlled List, Lieutenant? And not unreasonably so."

And if the drug had been an instrument of Inquiry from the Controlled List, why would Koscuisko have given orders to prepare his prisoner for the more direct and grossly physical torment of the Wall? There was no reason why she would know. Koscuisko had very little to do with the Controlled List. Captain Lowden was interested in punishment, in deterrent horror. Actual information was rather low on Captain Lowden’s list of priorities.

"I will explain myself, Lieutenant. It is only a stimulant to counteract the narcotics with which I sent this man to sleep, yesterday. Or was it instead perhaps this morning, already? I require his attention, and that means he must wake up. But the drug is not in and of itself torture."

Taking her arm once more Koscuisko strolled over to the far end of the room, pausing next to the door to open up a cabinet and display the Record. Talking all the while.. TOP

"There is a school of thought which holds that dirty work cleanly done does not soil, and that the Controlled List is an elegant solution to the problem of getting one’s hands dirty. For myself I cannot respect that way of thinking. If I am to murder Riveg Ndisi at length the very least I owe him is to know the smell of his blood for what it is, and acknowledge myself soiled well and truly, body and soul. Read from here, please, Lieutenant."

He pointed her at the Record; the Lieutenant frowned at what she saw on the scroller. "With respect, your Excellency. This states confession in good form has been accepted and logged. Why are we here?"

Koscuisko’s point exactly, if the Lieutenant but knew. And she would guess. If not now, then later. "No, you must read it out loud, you are to be on Record. Proceed. If you please, Lieutenant."

He’d left her few options. Frowning, ap Rhiannon scowled at the scroller. "For the Record. In the matter of Riveg Ndisi, accused. Command override has been issued for implied collaterals, the Eight Level is authorized. By Fleet Captain Griers Verigson Lowden, Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok, commanding the Writ of Andrej Ulexeievitch Koscuisko, duly assigned."

Nodding with approval now Koscuisko switched the scroller to neutral. "Your question is answered?"

"Sir. I hadn’t realized. But as long as the Captain has more personal knowledge of what this prisoner may know—". TOP

"Riveg Ndisi," Koscuisko interrupted her firmly. "Not ‘this prisoner,’ Lieutenant. Never ‘this prisoner.’ If you give the orders you must remember the name, it is not ‘this prisoner,’ it is a man, and he is called Riveg Ndisi. You will need to know this information. It is useful to be able to greet them by their names, when they visit you at night. Once they are dead."

She didn’t know how to interpret this apparently nonsensical claim on Koscuisko’s part. Her look of confusion didn’t seem to disturb Koscuisko; he simply drove his point home with what he clearly felt to be a cogent argument.

"And they will visit you at night, Lieutenant, you can my word accept on this. I have experience."

The Lieutenant might have heard rumors about Koscuisko; she might not have. Koscuisko’s people were possessive, careful of their officer’s dignity. And still there were rumors, because to have once heard Koscuisko screaming in his sleep was to believe in the existence of a living Hell.

And it was hard for decent people to hold the horror of that revelation within themselves without succumbing to the temptation to diminish the horror by witnessing to it with their fellows. Calling it by its name, as Koscuisko called his dead by name, pleading with them to understand that they were dead and were no longer suffering. That there was nothing that he could do to end their suffering. That they were dead.

She accepted Koscuisko’s calm assurances with a calm of her own that was good enough that Stildyne couldn’t tell if it was real or feigned. "Thank you, your Excellency, and I’ll remember. It’s Riveg Ndisi. Sir. What next?" TOP

Maybe she’d decided to humor him, without spending too much time analyzing what he’d actually said. Koscuisko seemed to be satisfied either way.

"Next it is that you and Chief Stildyne leave, Lieutenant. I have work to do, and the period for orientation tour is over now. Good-greeting. Chief, it there is to be rhyti, please be so good as to hurry it, but kindly. Ndisi will be waking soon. I should like to be alone, before then."

Of course. He’d always known how to hurry people. Only since Koscuisko had come to Ragnarok had it ever occurred to him to do it kindly; and the only reason he bothered even now was because Koscuisko would think less of him if he handled Koscuisko’s bond-involuntaries any less carefully than Koscuisko himself did. There were times when Stildyne stopped to look at his life, and how Koscuisko had changed it, and felt that Andrej Koscuisko had been a disaster as unforeseen as it was absolute.

"According to his Excellency’s good pleasure. Hurrying." Behind them, on the Wall, the prisoner was beginning to stir, or to try to stir, groaning. High time they were out of there. "Lieutenant."

"Thank you for the opportunity, your Excellency." Her salute was careful, formal, and precise. And perhaps just a little wary. Or maybe—Stildyne told himself—he was imagining things. "Good-greeting, sir."

The door from the ready-room, next to the Record, opened abruptly, and Pyotr stepped through with a rhyti-service on a tray. The Lieutenant went out the way Pyotr had come in as soon as Pyotr cleared the entryway: Stildyne followed after.

When Koscuisko went home who would wake him when he dreamt?. TOP

When Koscuisko went home would he dream?

Stildyne accompanied the Lieutenant out of the area, silent and brooding.

He wouldn’t know.

That was the worst of it.

Koscuisko would go home; and Stildyne would never hear from him again.

— End —

Notes

See Kerenko Flashback for a look at some of the things that go on in his Excellency's mind once prisoners are dead — and finally safe from him, and Captain Lowden — and he's trying to regain his psychological equilibrium (such as it is).

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