Scenes from the Cutting Room Floor
Mergau Noycannir, Scenes (1)
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Introduction

In the long arc of the Koscuisko novels the stormy relationship between Andrej Koscuisko and Chilleau Judiciary is as important as it is mutable. In the first draft of Prisoner of Conscience there was a lot of plot-extraneous material pertinent to this long-term story arc, much of which was dropped in the final printed draft.

Here I'm going to restore the Mergau scenes that were written and dropped, as well as sharing some Andrej scenes that were either connected with the second sapper sequence (which was not used in the published version) or cut from the final draft for brevity's sake. This material does a lot of backgrounding for the larger story of Jurisdiction versus the Nurail.

There's a scene in here with Joslire, and he doesn't have much of a part in it but since he's dead now (you =have= read the novel, haven't you?) it's all we're going to get. This section also includes one final "reaction shot" kind of a scene in which the Captain reports Joslire's death to the bond-involuntaries left on Scylla.

Next month, the last of the scenes written for and cut from Prisoner of Conscience, and a kind of an odd bonus scene: that in which Mergau Noycannir in the full flush of her triumph arrives at Port Rudistal ready to take command, and discovers to her dismay that Andrej Koscuisko is running the Domitt Prison.

For now consider the following:

Hinen Pilask, from whose point of view this first scene is written, was a character created strictly in order to provide a point of view from which Mergau and the First Secretary could be seen interacting by a more neutral third party . . . more neutral than Mergau, at least. Interestingly enough the only scenes that survived into the printed version of Prisoner of Conscience were Mergau POV scenes . . . does that mean something?

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"'The successful reduction of Eild would be good cause to congratulate Chilleau Judiciary and the Doxtap Fleet alike,'" the First Secretary read aloud, "'were it not for persistent questions concerning the nature and necessity for the campaign. While all under Jurisdiction can only applaud the valiant performance of the Doxtap Fleet, reasonable souls still question the basic presumptions that formed the grounds for this latest, and it is to be hoped final, action - ' oh, chots."

Crumpling the offending textrans into a small limp wad Verlaine lofted it toward the cycler on the corner of his great gleaming worktable. "And a very great deal more along the same lines. The Eighth Judge is having a field day with this, gentles."

Hinen Pilask—Third Undersecretary to the First Secretary, Chilleau Judiciary, Second Judge Sem Por Har Presiding—watched the discarded textrans waver on the edge of the cycler before being sucked in at last, and held his peace. He wasn't about to call attention to himself. There were plenty of other people in the First Secretary's office, all nine Undersecretaries, several others of Verlaine's support staff. Somebody else could just make the obvious point: they were in over their heads at Eild, and it was going to get worse before it got better, and if they were able to conclude this whole sorry Nurail business without a major public relations disaster it would be a wonderful surprise. But it wasn't likely.

"Point isn't whether we should have put our mark on it in the first place," Senior Undersecretary Turboden rasped. "Point is demonstrating that we're doing the best we can with what we've got. Once the Nurail are successfully disposed of it will blow over. It's not as though we don't have other problems."

True enough. The Bench had more than enough to keep it occupied with ever-increasing problems with the Free Government, and the chronic difficulties presented by trying to maintain the Judicial order over as wide an expanse of space—with as many different worlds, and intelligent species, and degrees of mobility—as were presently described as under Jurisdiction. TOP

There were calls to increase the number of Judges Presiding to try to deal with the increased complexity of Bench administration; for himself Pilask wasn't sure that would really accomplish much. There were also voices that proclaimed that the Jurisdiction had reached the natural limit of its breadth and scope generations gone by, that the unrest to be found across Jurisdiction space was merely a symptom of a larger problem within the Bench itself. That argument held that the ever-increasing degree of political repression exercised by Bench resources in support of the Judicial order was ineffective at best and exacerbated the problem at worst.

It was better not to listen to such views.

They all seemed to head back to Free Government insurrectionaries.

"Relocation fleet is standing by, First Secretary?" someone asked. Verlaine quit fidgeting with his stylus for long enough to punch the stats up onto the overheads, so that they could all see.

"Dramissoi Fleet, in fact, Purcha. Yes. Bench Relocation Officer Shinjosi Vopalar, Commanding." Verlaine sounded frustrated, or maybe he was just bored. Like many small and wiry men the First Secretary seemed to have a low threshold for quiet meditation on single problems: though it certainly hadn't stopped him from rising to his current position of influence, nor diminished his material contributions toward increasing the Second Judge's power on the Bench as he came along. "And she's got a good reputation, the transmit pulses haven't dug up any dirt on Vopalar yet. Our problem isn't the Dramissoi Fleet at this time. Our problem is rather what we do once we load the pops at Eild and haul them out of there."

The Second Judge was already being criticized for Chilleau Judiciary's role in the Nurail campaigns; there were influential voices within the Bench that maintained that Chilleau Judiciary had no business making a Bench Precedent out of the Nurail in the first place. That was old news. TOP

Whether or not the Nurail had posed a genuine threat to the Judicial order, or simply fallen prey to the machinations of an ancestral enemy with undisclosed connections at Chilleau Judiciary, was something for the historians to figure out. Their solution would have more to do with how well Verlaine maintained the Second Judge's position than anything else, but that was by the way. That was what history was all about.

What was needed now was damage control. The voice of outraged accusation would die off soon enough without additional fuel for the wrathful diatribes. There was no way around the Second Judge's role in the Nurail campaigns; but the Nurail campaigns were over. Time to redefine Chilleau Judiciary's image a bit.

"Once the evidence starts coming out of the prison at port Rudistal there shouldn't be any more question about the Second Judge's handling of this whole mess," someone over toward the wall noted. Pilask turned in his seat, straining to see: Monahill. One of the First Secretary's personal support staff, as opposed to an Undersecretary who operated in more or less independent support—whatever that was supposed to mean. Pilask hadn't ever been called upon to operate in "independent support," and he really didn't care if he never was. "But until we have Evidence on Record anybody can say just about anything they like. And we have no answer."

"No question." The First Secretary's voice—oddly deep, coming from such a reedy man—was reflective now, as though he had recovered from his irritation at the Eighth Judge's criticism. "We've got to get that processing center going, and I mean producing hard results. Fleet's been balking on the issue of resources, but with the Doxtap Fleet on administrative refit for a while they should find themselves without much more to say about it."

It was an effort not to turn around and glance back in Monahill's direction. He'd seen Mergau Noycannir back there with some of the others. Everybody knew what Mergau Noycannir thought of the problems the First Secretary was having getting Fleet to release resources to activate the Judicial function at the Domitt Prison; she'd been vocal enough on the issue. For Verlaine to be talking about resources in her presence in front of all these senior staff members was clear evidence of how badly her position had eroded since her return from Fleet Orientation Station Medical three years gone past, Standard.v

Nobody wanted to be the one to speak up. Noycannir would take it personally, whatever was said. And Noycannir was unpleasant to deal with.

Noycannir's sharp shrill voice filled the waiting silence, as if she had to speak despite herself, even though she surely understood that she was only exposing herself to a public snub. "Chilleau Judiciary already has a Writ at its disposal," Noycannir said. "And it's the First Secretary's to dispose of. It's the only way to be sure that the truth will be speedily exposed, completely disclosed."

Send me.

Mergau Noycannir, Verlaine's pet Sabaled whore, the first—and probably only—person ever to be so much as admitted to Fleet Orientation Station Medical without Bench medical certifications. The first, and probably only, person ever to graduate from Fleet Orientation Station Medical without a Chief Medical Officer's berth as her reward for completing a torturer's apprenticeship.

Noycannir had been an experiment, from a period when the First Secretary had been pursuing several different avenues of increasing the Second Judge's influence and authority. A failed experiment. For all Noycannir's drive, intelligence, and demonstrated willingness to manipulate the system by saying just what senior management wanted to hear Noycannir had proved once and for all that to implement the Protocols at an effective level a qualified medical practitioner was absolutely necessary; and she wasn't one.

"I had originally intended to dispatch you to activate the Domitt Prison two years ago, Mergau." There was a note of curiously gentle regret in the First Secretary's voice. He had never blamed her for her failure, for the unnecessary deaths or the ruined interrogations, not where anybody had ever heard him to report it; doubtless aware of the fact that there were elements aplenty at Chilleau Judiciary who would have been more than eager to take any sign that she had fallen completely out of favor as their license to put her out of the way permanently. TOP

But she had cost him much in favors and influence, and in the end it had been worth nothing to his purpose or the Second Judge's position on the Bench.

"I ran into a problem right away, though, as we've discussed before. We're already getting so much heat, our management of the Domitt Prison has got to be clean from the dirt up. I'm afraid evidence obtained under your Writ would be discounted at best, Mergau, discredited at worst. That would be counterproductive. And unfair to you, as well."

She had learned the forms and the procedures at Fleet Orientation Station Medical, right enough. She had learned how to torture, had demonstrated her enthusiastic mastery of how to make men scream and beg and die. What she could not do—what she had time and again demonstrated her inability to do—was obtain information, confession, names and dates and facts to be cross-validated.

She did not have the skill of some Inquisitors to torment a creature without harming it beyond the point where confession could be had while sense could still be made of it. She did not have the in-depth medical knowledge required to mine the Controlled List for drugs that would elicit damning information against the prisoner's will. Since the Judicial process relied upon confession to validate the torments it invoked, the end result was that Mergau Noycannir was functionally useless to the First Secretary and Chilleau Judiciary.

"Resources from the Doxtap Fleet, you said, First Secretary?" Sips Benur asked from beside Pilask, no hint in her smooth neutral tone that she despised Noycannir for the failure that the Sabeled woman was. "Who've they got for us to use, do we have a name?"

Noycannir had made Benur look ridiculous in front of the First Secretary's staff, once, two or three years gone by. It had been something to do with an instruction that the First Secretary had issued for Noycannir to promulgate but that Benur hadn't heard about. There had been pointed questions from the First Secretary about Benur's non-compliance, and Pilask at least had come away feeling that Verlaine suspected Benur of dragging her feet on implementation. TOP

Noycannir had protested afterwards—strictly in private, of course—that it had been an honest error on her part. Noycannir had also declined to explain the confusion to the First Secretary on the grounds that the incident was over and forgotten; but Benur had neither forgotten or forgiven the incident, and still smarted from the sting of it. Pilask couldn't help but suspect Benur had a specific reason for asking her specific question. What was on her mind?

The First Secretary sighed, and stood up from his desk to signal close of staff. "Not to put too fine a point to it, Benur, yes, resources from the Doxtap Fleet. Several of the foundation ships sustained major damage, but only one lost its Secured Medical area. It will be some time before Scylla is refitted to support the Judicial function in Secured Medical, and Fleet has agreed to loan out Scylla's Chief Medical Officer on several months' assignment. Anything else?"

The question was directed at the whole room, rather than just Benur; the First Secretary was clearly done with staff for now.

"Shouldn't we find out whether there's someone more suitable available?" Mergau Noycannir sounded half-strangled with fury, too quick to grasp the point for her own good. "There have been problems with that individual before, First Secretary, you were unhappy enough to consider issuing a reprimand after the last incident."

Nobody said a word.

Verlaine simply stood there and scanned their faces for a moment, almost too clearly still waiting to see if anyone had anything important to say.

"Very well." Nodding decisively at last, First Secretary Verlaine dismissed them to go off and chew on the meaning of the recent events at Eild. "Mergau, I will meet with you thirdshift, please have the model interrogatories prepared. Good-greeting, gentles all, I'll see you again tomorrow, thanks for coming." TOP

Model interrogatories for the Fleet Inquisitor to take to port Rudistal, a skeleton, a framework that would explain just what the Second Judge believed to have been happening at Eild and just exactly the sorts of confessions Chilleau Judiciary wanted to obtain. Model interrogatories to be prepared by Mergau Noycannir for Andrej Koscuisko's use, for who here hadn't learned by now that Noycannir's fellow-Student had been Andrej Koscuisko on board of Scylla, a man whose skill and expertise in both aspects of his dual role made Noycannir's inadequacies all the more painfully obvious to one and all?

"Low blow," Pilask murmured, quietly, to Benur as they left the First Secretary's office. Benur only smiled.

"I know." Beaming like a well-fed scrumblecat with a patch of sun all to itself, Benur clearly didn't care who saw her. Or heard her. "And I enjoyed every fraction of it. What goes around comes around. She'll learn."

It wasn't as though Andrej Koscuisko himself was likely to appreciate the posting. Perhaps it was just as well these staff frictions were kept confined to Bench offices.

Let Koscuisko guess that he'd been chosen at least partially to put a political agenda forward for Chilleau Judiciary, and the odds of getting good ammunition against the Second Judge's critics out of those interrogations to come would probably diminish into utter improbability. TOP

This next scene was interesting to rediscover for me because it's the first time I think I ever wrote a scene from the First Secretary's point of view. The last time, too, so far as I can tell.

Mergau is referring to the action of the second sapper sequence when she refers to "the reports from Eild," immediately below. Verlaine's comment that Koscuisko was "quite right about Norib," later in the scene, was meant to indicate the existence of other similar stunts on Koscuisko's part that had come to the attention of the authorities — implying in turn that there are many more examples of Koscuisko's stunts that have never come under official notice. It was all intended to support your perception of Andrej Koscuisko as a man who is playing the rules for all they're worth to get what he wants.

"The Patron has reviewed the reports from Eild?" Mergau Noycannir asked in a careful tone of voice whose surface neutrality could not disguise the underlying eagerness Verlaine knew was there. "I'm very concerned about the issues that Koscuisko's recent behavior raises. He doesn't seem to be very responsive to coaching, could be a sign of potential trouble."

First Secretary Sindha Verlaine swallowed a sigh of resignation. It had to be hard on her, sending her arch-rival to the Domitt Prison in her place to enjoy the almost absolute power the Writ on site granted its holder. That Andrej Koscuisko himself almost certainly had no clue that he was Mergau's arch-rival—in her own mind, at least—could only make the pain the more galling to Mergau.

"If you mean the prisoner report. Yes. I've read it. And forwarded it to the Bench Intelligence Specialist assigned, for analysis."

In fact he had Specialist Ivers' draft report in cube on viewer even now, though there was no reason to trouble Mergau with that information. That Koscuisko had apparently engineered the death of a Nurail prisoner under cover of an attack in Infirmary was not nearly so interesting, in Ivers' words, as the fact that Fleet Captain Irshah Parmin hadn't brought his Ship's Surgeon up on Charges of insubordination over the incident. TOP

In fact Irshah Parmin had only good—if somewhat guarded—things to say about his Ship's Inquisitor. It was unusual for veteran Command Branch to tolerate any such officer playing fast and loose with the rule of Law, not so much because they were dedicated Bench officers but because Fleet traditionally tolerated little that might be seen as taking matters into one's own hands.

"This is only the latest example of Koscuisko's unsuitability for his post. I wonder he hasn't been at least disciplined before now. It's flagrant disrespect for Command. As well as a violation of Bench protocol."

She would love to call it mutiny, and have it stick. Mergau Noycannir would sell her soul—if she believed she had one—for a Tenth Level Command Termination judgment to be executed against Andrej Koscuisko, even if she could not be the one to implement it.

It had been a mistake from the beginning to try to obtain a Writ for Chilleau Judiciary. Mergau blamed Koscuisko for her repeated inadequacies, as if Koscuisko had anything to do with it simply because he was developing into the most obvious example of why Fleet wanted Inquisitors with medical skills. But Verlaine knew it was really his own fault.

"Absent formal notice by his Command we can do nothing, Mergau, regardless of how we feel," he reminded her, leaning back in his chair. He was tired of Noycannir's resentment and disgusted by her duplicity and hostility. He knew very well what she said about him when she thought she was safe from Record. She had enemies. "So long as Fleet Captain Irshah Parmin chooses to tolerate his behavior there is no problem with his behavior. And his ratings are actually quite good."

She wouldn't like to be reminded, but he couldn't help that. Koscuisko's ratings were excellent as far as Irshah Parmin's assessment of him as a Chief Medical Officer and Ship's Surgeon went. There was something there that was causing Irshah Parmin to overlook the way Koscuisko seemed to re-interpret the requirements of Judicial procedure so creatively from time to time, something that explained Irshah Parmin's tolerance of Koscuisko's indiscretions.

Verlaine thought he knew the answer. TOP

He thought the answer was that Koscuisko was simply a very tolerable battle surgeon, and Irshah Parmin was too surprised—even after these three years—to have been sent a Ship's Inquisitor with genuinely solid medical skills, rather than the mediocrities the program usually managed to recruit, to let himself get aggravated.

It wouldn't help to point these things out to Mergau Noycannir.

And in point of fact Verlaine himself was still aggravated at Fleet for sending Koscuisko off to Scylla in the first place to prevent Verlaine from drafting him for Chilleau Judiciary under pretext of a research posting; at Koscuisko for having gone to Scylla to avoid assignment to Chilleau Judiciary, and for having consistently declined all of the opportunities Verlaine had created for him to change his mind and come work for the Second Judge.

First Secretary Sindha Verlaine was accustomed to the fact that people were not always going to respect him.

But he considered that Koscuisko's insistence on keeping to Scylla amounted to disrespect of the Second Judge: another matter altogether.

"Perhaps the prison administration in Rudistal will have some pertinent remarks." Mergau's suggestion was undisguisedly gleeful, and Verlaine suppressed a wince at the malice in her voice. "He has too vital a mission at the Domitt Prison. I have already sent an informal message to ensure that he can find no fault when he gets there, no easy outs this time."

Frowning, Verlaine tagged a note. He would have to get someone to recover that message, whatever it was. She had exceeded her authority, but as long as it was sufficiently informal he could probably allow the error to pass without formal notice.

"Koscuisko was quite right about Norib, Mergau, and as far as I'm concerned the matter's closed. You shouldn't be meddling in Judicial matters, it's potentially compromising." TOP

He couldn't let it go without notice taken in private, though. The prison administration at Rudistal, where the Domitt Prison had been built to process Nurail prisoners, didn't necessarily understand Mergau's position at Chilleau Judiciary, partially because Verlaine had kept it ambiguous precisely in order to save what face for her he could.

She had hoped for so much, when she'd gone to Fleet Orientation Station Medical. She had gone for him, and for him she had willingly studied the theory and practice of torture. She'd made all the sacrifices, and gained none of the prize she had hoped to win. She had been cruelly disappointed, and through no fault of her own. They had known all along that she didn't have the medical education to support the Writ in the traditional manner. That was his responsibility. His fault. He owed her a debt of obligation to keep her with as much face as could be managed.

Now she was angry at him, and would be off to complain that he thought her incapable of understanding procedure. He'd hear all about it, he was sure. She wasn't popular. People were happy to make sure he knew all the unflattering things she had to say about him; he had almost come to rely upon it as a useful check to his ego.

"Oh, well, if you don't think we should be giving them a heads-up." Mergau shrugged, her body language an exaggerated expression of yielding to irrationality on the part of a superior. "I didn't realize you were going to let them manage on their own without any help from us. I won't let it happen again."

Even her language changed. At times like these Verlaine was most tempted to cut his losses and let her find the fate that awaited her at the hands of her enemies at Chilleau Judiciary: but that was bad for morale and discipline. As well as being ultimately unfair to Noycannir.

Suffering the unpleasantness of her pretentious behavior was the least penance he could do in atonement. TOP

"I'm just saying we need to exercise good judgment. We're in the target registration of every critic on every Bench under Jurisdiction, you know that. The last thing we need is for some regional prison administration to misunderstand the nature of a communication from us and take inappropriate action."

He didn't really know why he bothered. It never did any good. And he hated himself for sounded so conciliatory when any other Clerk of Court who took that tone of voice with him would be out of her job so fast she'd be lucky if the backwash didn't flatten her. And a good chance of coming up on Charges for misuse of Bench resources, misrepresenting source communication. "Thanks for raising your concerns, Mergau. You know I've got my eye on that young officer."

Three years ago and more Mergau Noycannir had first tipped him off about her then-fellow Student, Andrej Koscuisko. He had seriously considered making a preemptive requisition when Fleet had pulled Koscuisko out from under him; and he'd been keeping tabs on Andrej Koscuisko ever since, more convinced as time went on that Koscuisko was the resource the Second Judge needed to ensure her developing influence continued to be supported by the very finest resources under Jurisdiction. He'd been watching Koscuisko, all right.

All the same it wasn't necessarily what Mergau wanted to hear. She knew as well as he did that his interest in Koscuisko continued to be acquisitive as well as skeptically judgmental. She bowed stiffly, almost impolite, making little effort to disguise the scowl that disfigured her otherwise perfectly agreeable face.

"Thank you, First Secretary. I only want what's best for our Judge."

Threatening him—howsoever implicitly—with going over his head to lay her concerns before the Second Judge?

No sense of propriety. TOP

"That'll be all for now, then, Mergau. Dismiss."

Once things were under control in port Rudistal he was emphatically going to have to think seriously about a special assignment for Mergau Noycannir.

We're back to Hinen Pilask with this one, a reaction shot to the incident in the prison camp in which Andrej got on his high horse, logged the release of prisoner without prejudice due to violation of the Protocols, and rode off into the sunset. Well, into Captain Vopalar's office, but whatever. More importantly, this scene marked the first appearance of the Bench Specialists in the Koscuisko story. Garol Vogel and Jils Ivers tell a story of their own in Angel of Destruction.

Somewhat smaller than the usual staff meeting, for a fact. There were only five people here beside the First Secretary himself, assembled by Verlaine's invitation to discuss what the notice had described merely as a "development." It didn't matter what the subline said, of course. With Verlaine's name on source transmit nobody would dream of waiving.

Hinen Pilask guessed by Mergau Noycannir's presence that the developments had something to do with Andrej Koscuisko and the Domitt Prison. TOP

Verlaine nodded his head at the Bench Intelligence Specialist who sat at the back of the room, and she got up and closed the door, keying security in effect. Bench Intelligence Specialist Jils Ivers. Hinen didn't care for her being here; Bench Intelligence Specialists made normal people very nervous. Their Judicial powers were all the more impressive for being undefined, and the things they were asked to do—and could accomplish—were far beyond the scope of normal souls.

What it was, precisely, that Jils Ivers was doing at Chilleau Judiciary was anyone's guess: Bench Intelligence Specialists were a Bench resource, not bound to any given Judiciary.

Her being here was an intriguing hint to be chewed over later.

For now, First Secretary Verlaine was rocking back in his seat and putting his feet up on the wastecabinet to one side of his worktable, clearly in preparation for opening his meeting.

"Thank you for coming, gentles all. A development that Mergau will share with us. I wonder how we are to interpret this. —Mergau, please."

He sounded relaxed and amused. Mergau flushed red, and then scowled at the worktable. She thought he was making a joke out of whatever it was. She didn't like being used for a joke. What made her think she was in any position to object to whatever use the First Secretary might put her to? She was lucky no-one had pushed her through the reedcurtains to her death.

"The First Secretary is pleased to make light of it, but there's no question it's a very serious matter from a Judicial standpoint. This report has come this morning from the Dramissoi Relocation Fleet. It states, among other things, that Andrej Koscuisko has been taking the rule of Law into his own hands. Releasing prisoners on pretext, without Command endorsement."

That didn't seem to be a problem on the face of it. Andrej Koscuisko had been specifically chartered to take the rule of Law into his hands, after all. That was what the Writ to Inquire was all about. TOP

"What pretext, Noycannir?" the Bench Specialist asked, without any color whatever in her utterly neutral and non-committed tone of voice. Mergau didn't like Ivers either: so much was obvious from the disgusted glare on Mergau's face. It was a waste of energy to develop feelings about Bench Intelligence Specialists, though. Bench Intelligence Specialists didn't care. They didn't have to.

"There is some talk of violation of Protocol." If Noycannir could have swallowed the reply she clearly would have done. "But that isn't the point. The point is his failure to respect his chain of Command. This doesn't look good for his usefulness at the Domitt Prison, First Secretary."

Verlaine himself seemed a little less inclined to dismiss the actual facts than Mergau clearly wished to. Taking up a flimsy from the padrest before him, Verlaine read to them aloud, for them to mark and meditate upon.

"'Incident report, Dramissoi Relocation Fleet, Eild. Prisoner determined to have been subjected to abuse outside of Protocol, released without prejudice by order, Andrej Ulexeievitch Koscuisko, Writ detailed.' There's a different interpretation we could put on this, Mergau. I don't think it needs to be a problem."

She should recognize the rebuke and submit to it; after all, Verlaine was giving her ample opportunity to smooth over any conflict by feeding him the next line in clear acceptance of his inclination to put a good face on things.

"The First Secretary has long been too lenient with this Koscuisko—"

She didn't seem interested in letting him make peace with her. Her angry retort seemed clearly on its way to some outburst that Hinen Pilask did not want to be witness to; not because he had any desire to protect Noycannir, far from it. The fallout from angry scenes tended to poison the performance evaluation of both the parties involved and anyone unfortunate enough to have simply been present: so he needed to head off this particular pyrotechnic display, before it had a chance to adversely affect his salary increase for the next term.

"You mean publicity, First Secretary?" Hinen asked, interrupting firmly. TOP

It was hard to pretend not to notice Noycannir's angry reaction and talk over her at the same time. The only thing that helped was that everyone but Noycannir wanted her to shut up before she said too much; each for their own reasons. Oh, except for the Bench Intelligence Specialist, maybe.

"You take my meaning exactly, Hinen."

Once Verlaine responded to him, not to her, the issue was no longer in doubt. Noycannir shut up, while Verlaine continued. "In some ways we couldn't ask for it better. Our Judge is already getting so much heat on this Nurail thing. The more independence of mind the Inquisitor we send to the Domitt displays on his way there, the more credibility we'll have for the evidence he produces."

Well, that was one way to look at it, for a fact.

In the moment of silent appreciation that followed Noycannir spoke, and she didn't seem to be making any effort to disguise the bitterness in her voice.

"Has the Domitt Prison heard of this great delicacy on Koscuisko's part? Because it's only fair they know if they're going to be set up."

First Secretary Verlaine seemed to surge to his feet, his anger unmistakable. "Quite enough, Mergau. Thank you, gentles all, that is all I have for you. If Miss Ivers would be good enough to stop behind, I have a question."

Enjoy Noycannir's evident loss of face though he did, Hinen couldn't help but feel that the First Secretary was being a little unfair. There were so many other times he could just as well or better have told her to shut up. And she had a good point about the Domitt Prison: they needed to be put on notice if Koscuisko was going to hold them to the procedurals. TOP

Initiating the useful life of the Domitt Prison by staging a purge of its Administration would not put the Second Judge's agenda forward. He would make sure the incident report was summarized in Chilleau Judiciary's daily distribution to Administrative resources assigned. He wouldn't have to do anything obvious like contact Rudistal: the point was obvious enough just from what the First Secretary had just read to them.

The Domitt Prison would know what steps to take to protect itself from any excess of Judicial leniency on the part of Andrej Ulexeievitch Koscuisko.

Here's a bit of character development and interaction. In these next three scenes Goslin Plugrath gets his fifteen seconds of fame; his role in the printed version was cut to almost nothing, so I'm including this look at the developing relationship (such as it was) between him and Andrej Koscuisko. It also develops by incidental reference the idea that Andrej already knows more about Nurail culture than many other people might, as witnessed by his sensitivity to the issue of identification of Burice's weaves. This is important because it motivates his error (in Hour of Judgment) with respect to his assumption about Hanner's genetic background.

I wrote these scenes to show ways in which Andrej was continuing to frustrate the authorities, and why; and there's Joslire in it. Not much of Joslire, but since he won’t be in any more scenes I might as well publish what I've got. Again, you'll see references here to the second version of the sapper sequence, cut from the final draft.

Catching Kaydence's eye, Koscuisko nodded, ready for the next. Kaydence Psimas bowed enough to make it plain he'd understood, and gestured with one hand through the open doorway to the briefing room for Jorfie and Erish to bring the next person of interest forward. TOP

They had been interviewing persons of interest all day.

They would be interviewing persons of interest until they got to port Rudistal.

The Dramissoi Relocation Fleet certainly seemed intent on making the most of Andrej Koscuisko, now that they'd got him.

This one came willingly enough, but Jorfie and Erish held close beside him regardless; there was no sense in taking any chances. Otherwise reasonable people all too frequently became utterly impossible to deal with once they but saw his Excellency's rank, and recognized his function for what it was. Kaydence scrolled through the referral as Erish helped the Nurail to sit down.

"Darset Nurail," he read aloud. Joslire was waiting with the osmo-stylus and the drugs, but his Excellency would want to be sure about the details. "Shastip in solution is suggested, your Excellency, six parts per unit body weight. One hundred and forty-three, that would be eight point five eight, sir?"

Koscuisko had listened from his seat behind his Record-table, leaning his chin into the palm of one hand, his arm propped up against the table's edge. "Darset? No, let's not do shastip. Talfer. Five point six three, talfer, Joslire, if you will. And your name is?"

Joslire went searching in Koscuisko's stores-satchel for the appropriate drug, and Koscuisko turned his attention to the Nurail seated before him. Not very tall, and dirty—but they were all dirty. The sheer number of people the Bench had decided to relocate put a strain on shipboard sanitary systems. Basic hygiene could be maintained amongst the deportees; but it was very basic. TOP

"My name is Burice." The voice that came out of that scrawny unprepossessing form was so deep and rich that Kaydence almost looked around to see who else might be in the room. "From Collit. But my mother's people—"

Koscuisko held up his hand, and the Nurail paused. "It is none of my business, your mother's weave," Koscuisko said. "It is only my business to put the preliminary interrogatories before you. Joslire is preparing a speak-serum, are you familiar with such a thing in concept?"

Someone had already gone through the preliminary interrogatories with this Burice, without benefit of speakserum. And, since his Excellency had made his point publicly and early about abuse of prisoners outside of Protocol, without any of the threats or rough-housing that might otherwise have characterized the process of winnowing unfortunate but otherwise innocuous souls from Nurail that the Bench might find of interest.

Burice frowned. "Which kind of speak-serum is it to be, then? That kind that makes to say what isn't so? Or only that kind that makes to say what's none of the Bench's business, with respect, your Excellency, certain and it must be so?"

Joslire had the dose prepared to press through, but paused, grinning, to wait his Excellency's response. Kaydence knew that Jos was grinning. The outside corners of his eyebrows lifted. Obvious, once you but knew the man.

Koscuisko squared himself to the table, ignoring the sudden affronted stiffening of the Bench observer behind him at the back wall. "That which encourages true utterance, whether or not it is prudent for one's self-protection. Prudence is not a Nurail virtue that I have been able to tell, please forgive me if I malign you, Burice." TOP

Kaydence laid the disposable fabric sterile-square down across the Nurail's neck, on guard for any signs of sudden resistance. There were none, which was prudent indeed, despite his Excellency's slander; there were four Security here beside his Excellency and the Bench officer, and all of them were bigger than the Nurail. Not as if that meant a great deal, necessarily. They were all bigger than Andrej Koscuisko, and their officer still took two and three of them to handle from time to time.

Times such as they could anticipate in their near future at the Domitt Prison —

But that was by the way. Joslire pressed the dose through; Kaydence could have reassured the Nurail, if anyone had asked him. Koscuisko had given the drugs to Joslire to be managed. If it was anything but an honest truth-teller Koscuisko would prepare the dose himself, and press it through, too. Andrej Koscuisko was peculiar that way. The Bench had provided bond-involuntaries to Inquisitors to implement the Protocols, to do the dirty work; their officer preferred to keep them out of it, to the maximum extent possible.

It would be a moment before the drug crossed the blood-brain barrier and set to work. Koscuisko used the time to review the documents that had been forwarded. The set of five questions was standardized, and Kaydence could easily recite them: what is your name, explain your presence at port Eild, what was your role in the hostilities recently concluded. Have you been a member of any unlawful resistance to the Judicial Order. Describe any contacts you may have had or attempted to initiate with terrorists representing themselves as the so-called Free Government.

"We will be official now." It was serious business, even if a person could easily be tempted to find some humor where they could after the eleventh or seventeenth repetition of the same set of questions. The answers—or his Excellency's evaluation of them, in his role as a judicial officer—would make the difference between simple relocation, garden-variety exile, plain ordinary displacement on the one hand and referral for further questioning—the Question, torture—on the other. His Excellency was deadly serious about that.

"I am Andrej Ulexeievitch Koscuisko, and I hold the Writ to which you must answer. Let the Record show that this interview is assisted by talfer, standard dose, for a Darset Nurail not on Charges here present. For the Record, state your name and your identification." TOP

The Nurail seemed a little irritated, and Kaydence could sympathize. "As if I haven't these eight and eighty times since your kind came to Port. My name is Rabin Burice. Darset for five generations. Hasn't changed."

Your Excellency, Erish signaled, in finger-code. The prisoner would be expected to be on his best Bench manners, and answer politely. Maybe that was the point. The Nurail wasn't a prisoner, not technically, not yet. Other people seemed willing enough to grant Koscuisko the dignity of his rank, though—there being no sense in borrowing trouble, or in antagonizing the man who had to make the decision between life and probable death. Maybe that was the Nurail's point: innocent of any Judicial malfeasance, he had no need to play up to their officer.

"Just as you say, Burice. Here is the next question. It is necessary for you to describe, explain your presence at port Eild." The whole system had been under Bench interdict for months, so what as a Darset Nurail doing there? The Darset Nurail had been forced into submission two years ago and more.

Well, had accepted the rule of Law under Jurisdiction by public vote, but there was little secret made about the coerced nature of that public vote, it being common knowledge by now that Darset had bent its collective neck to avoid a bloodbath. So the fact that Burice was Darset Nurail was of particular interest in and of itself. That was quite possibly the reason Burice had been referred in the first place.

"Also no change." It was as though the Nurail would have liked to sneer, but found himself unaccountably sleepy instead. "What's happening. To me."

"It is the drug, Burice, the speak-serum. It is not to be enough, that you state for me that there has been no change. You must in explicit words provide the answer. If you please." TOP

"I-am-a-trader-in-raw-fleeces." Burice recited the sentence in sing-song, his clear disgust with the proceedings more than evident. More proof that he felt no fear or threat, and therefore probably had no reason to. "Port-Eild-is-my-customary-market. I was there when the ban was cried, couldn't get out. You've confiscated my fleeces as well, and there's five thousand two hundred and thirty-seven owing, write that down. You. Inquisitor."

There was a disgusted snort from the Bench observer, but the Bench Lieutenant kept his peace apart from that. The relocation fleet's First Officer had shackled this Lieutenant Goslin Plugrath to the officer's ankle after the incident with the tortured Nurail prisoner. By and large the Lieutenant kept out of his Excellency's way, but it had not taken long to realize that Plugrath resented the assignment and didn't particularly care who knew it.

Perhaps Plugrath felt they should terrorize this Nurail in order to amend his manners and correct his language. Plugrath didn't understand. Koscuisko would insist on precise and respectful address from a prisoner. Burice's disrespect helped Koscuisko remain focussed on the fact that the man was not for Koscuisko's pleasure in Inquiry—yet.

"Next question, what was your role in—"

Suddenly agitated, Burice half-stood, interrupting. "Wait, what does it say, what is the Record? Read it back to me. Fifty-two and—"

"Thirty-seven." Koscuisko's voice was patient, reassuring. "The figure you have stated for the Record is fifty-two hundred, thirty-seven for your fleeces, is this correct, or do you wish to amend your testimony?"

Calm again, Burice subsided back into the chair, slumping against the curved seat-back. "Could have claimed fifty-four hundred and been within my rights. But it's been a bad year for fleeces. And there's the smoke damage to consider as well, all right."

"Your role in the hostilities just completed. If you would." TOP

"My role, he says, such lovely language it's got. I sat and watched my fleeces lose value, your Excellency." So Burice did know what one called a Ship's Inquisitor, even if he didn't care to observe the proprieties. "I sat on dispatch for the firemen. And I carried bodies for the healers. It was a horror, port Eild, I hope to never see anything like it again in my life."

"By the firemen you mean who, exactly?"

"The people who try to put out the fire," Burice explained with deliberate care, as though to a child. "So as to keep the houses from burning. People need houses. It's to live in."

His Excellency was well satisfied, to judge by the twitching at the corner of his lip. He'd been worried that someone would misinterpret "firemen" at some later date, so much was obvious. "Have you undertaken, or supported the undertaking of, unlawful resistance to the Judicial order, in any way direct or indirect?"

"We voted, at Darset." Burice was apparently resentful of this question. It was a little broadly stated, that was true. Technically speaking membership in an organization with a secret agenda would be compromising, whether or not the man had any knowledge of insurrectionary intent. "And I've minded my business since. There's no market for my fleeces in a war zone. I'm a loyal citizen. I'd be starving, else."

Now, this was an interesting problem in Judicial procedure. Burice hadn't answered the question. Instead he'd made several statements which might be taken together as forming an acceptably direct response. Had he not answered the question in due form because he was under the influence of a speak-serum, and dared not hazard a direct answer for fear of compromising himself against his will?

Or was his answer in fact complete and compliant because he was under the influence of a speak-serum, and therefore speaking only candid and unedited truth? TOP

Kaydence knew which way Koscuisko was likely to judge. Lucky for Burice. The curse of the blood was on Andrej Koscuisko, he had the truth-sense. He knew when people were lying to him, speak-serum or no.

"Consistent with what you have told us previously, now confirmed under compulsion. Finally. That which is to do with the Free Government."

This was the critical question. The Bench had invoked the force of arms against the Eild Nurail on the grounds that their resistance to assimilation was evidence of Free Government activity, rather than the natural reluctance of a free people to accept restraint and regulation.

They would have Evidence in time, Kaydence was sure enough of that; there almost certainly had been Free Government at port Eild, and someone almost certainly would be found to have coordinated with them for arms and supplies. There would be enough to validate the Bench's rationalizations, for what little that was worth.

Burice seemed to be thinking hard, but whether it was because he had something to say—or was trying to avoid blurting out an incriminating truth—Kaydence could not easily guess. "A'think. There may have been. Some people chased through the streets, and the mob after them, not long before it was lost for good and all. Someone said it was Free Government, and people bitter at promises made, not kept. Something."

Koscuisko had tensed as Burice had started talking, as though afraid that the interrogation would turn sour on him so close to a satisfactory completion. There was nothing actionable in having witnessed a mob scene, however; and Koscuisko relaxed, the line of his shoulders smoothing as he sat.

"The Record absolutely requires an answer in good form, Burice. Have you had any personal contact with persons representing themselves as belonging to the Free Government?" TOP

A fractional hesitation, as Burice thought; then his expression lightened in relief. "No. Your Excellency."

"And have you attempted to initiate any contact with such persons?"

"No, your Excellency."

Koscuisko was already making his mark in the documentation as Burice spoke. "Very good, thank you, Burice. There are no grounds for referral, citizen is remanded to custody of the Dramissoi Relocation Fleet without prejudice. No Cause for investigation exists. The Record is complete."

That was that, then. The Bench Lieutenant made a disgusted face to himself in the corner, but Kaydence didn't care whether Plugrath was disgusted. One less person referred for Cause was one less potential prisoner to suffer beneath his Excellency's hand. That was all that really mattered.

Koscuisko set his stylus down and met the Nurail's eyes. "Do you have anything else before you're dismissed, Burice?"

Burice surprised Kaydence, and it was an unpleasant surprise. If something should come up now, with the Bench Lieutenant observing, Koscuisko would have to re-open the Record, there would be no way around it . . . "Something of that. If you don't mind. From Scylla, they're saying, is it true?"

Koscuisko nodded, clearly a little apprehensive himself. What harm could there be in so innocuous a question as that, though? "I am assigned to Scylla, yes. That's right."

"There's rumor about the sappers that tried for Scylla. Some are saying one survived." TOP

And there were people in custody related to the people who had come so close to destroying the ship. That was too obvious to need statement. Nor was there any reason to suspect an ulterior motive behind the impulse to ask, given access to the one man who was most likely to know.

"Survived, but not for very long," Koscuisko assured the man—for the sake of kin and loved ones. "In fact I can't even tell you who it was. We had him on wards pending referral to Secured Medical, and the first I knew he was even conscious he had attacked me. With one of my own knives."

Just as well Koscuisko himself wasn't on any speak-serum, any truth-teller. Because although no words could be exchanged between bond-involuntary Security on the subject, the unspoken assumption on board Scylla was that Koscuisko had very likely engineered the entire incident specifically in order to keep a wounded enemy from the horror of a death by slow torture.

"I'm still black-and-blue where he cut me, here, shall I show you the scar? No? As close to a war wound as I am ever likely to get, would that the story were a more romantic one."

Burice did not respond to Koscuisko's mock-forlorn lament. "Dead, then. And cleanly. With no disrespect, your Excellency."

"And very nearly took me with him. There is no disrespect in wishing a swift death to any man, rather than Secured Medical. Gentlemen, we are finished, escort Burice to a recovery room, we will not be seeing him again."

Joslire took one elbow, Kaydence took the other, and finally it occurred to Burice that he was free to go. On his feet and to the door in record time, not that Kaydence could blame him a bit for it; but he was safe, now. Almost as safe as that dead Nurail sapper, in a manner of speaking.

Still—Kaydence mused, following Joslire and Burice down the corridor to the recovery room where Burice would wait out the metabolism of the speak-serum—he could wish that Koscuisko had not suggested that he might have been killed, he, himself, Andrej Koscuisko. TOP

Ship's Inquisitors were shot at frequently enough as it was.

A relocation fleet full of Nurail in shock was not the best place to stand upon a pillar and cry out that one was mortal after all.

In the waiting stillness of the briefing room Andrej Koscuisko reviewed the morning's work, checking off points one by one with his stylus-point. He knew what was coming. It had been coming since the first of these follow-up interrogatories, hours ago now. The back of his neck—where the Nurail sapper had cut him—pricked unpleasantly; but not because the wound itself troubled him. It was Lieutenant Plugrath's eyes boring into the back of his head. Lieutenant Plugrath trying to decide what to say, how to say it.

Maybe he would handle it better if he spoke first.

"Thank you, gentlemen." Jorfie and Erish were due to take rest-shift, Code was coming on, and Calleigh Samons to stand fourth-man. Chief Samons didn't mind this sort of interview, he'd already checked. And at least so far he'd successfully avoided referring more than two souls to the next level; which brought him right back to his problem.

"You may be excused, perhaps you will for me ask Code for my mid-meal. Lieutenant Plugrath. Do you wish for mid-meal to break, or do we continue? There are so many to be gotten through."

Twenty-one days from port Eild to port Rudistal, and this only the middle of the first of them. Andrej hadn't counted the number of referrals. There were so many. And it depressed him. TOP

"At your disposal entirely, your Excellency." Lieutenant Plugrath's voice was careful, clearly restrained in some way. "There are other calls for his Excellency's attention, of course. If the officer would permit a question, sir."

Oh, here it was. And yet Andrej could not find it in him to fault the Lieutenant, not as careful as he was clearly trying to be. Plugrath's language was as formal almost as that of a bond-involuntary; and Lieutenant Plugrath was Command Branch. Captain Vopalar had wished to impress upon him the fact that an observer was required out of necessity, not lack of respect. "Of course, Lieutenant Plugrath. Please."

"It was impossible to avoid noticing a variance—or what seems to be a variance—between the model interrogatories we received from Chilleau Judiciary, and the way in which his Excellency puts the inquiry forward." Rising to his feet, Plugrath came to stand at the side of the worktable in a modified position of command wait that either served to underscore his careful approach or was simply habitual.

Andrej couldn't tell which.

And he didn't care.

Did Plugrath think Andrej didn't know perfectly well the multiple faults Plugrath had elected to find with his conduct of the inquiry? Just because he'd had his back to the Lieutenant all morning didn't mean he couldn't hear. That, and Andrej had been working with his bond-involuntary Security for more than three years now, and he knew how to read their body language, expressionless as it might seem on the surface.

Plugrath chose his words as daintily as any man could wish, as he continued. "If his Excellency would care to discuss this seeming discrepancy. I will know what to say to Captain, when the issue should arise." TOP

Very well. It wasn't an unreasonable request, on the face of it. "Here, let us set these side by side, Lieutenant." He had the model interrogatories that Chilleau Judiciary had so thoughtfully forwarded. There was a place for model interrogatories; they had a legitimate role in clarifying the information that the Judicial authority believed to be in the possession of the Accused. "Here, from the Second Judge. Here, from our last interview. Examine in particular this last, if you please."

He had asked about contact or attempts to contact Free Government insurrectionaries. Chilleau Judiciary's questions were much more general than that.

Plugrath obliged readily enough. "The Second Judge asks whether the subject under inquiry has ever supported Free Government agendas covertly or overtly, sir. With respect, it seems more to the point than the way in which his Excellency has chosen to phrase the question."

Just so. "Now put yourself in the place of any honest Nurail, Lieutenant, for just one moment. Port Eild has been under siege for weeks. There has been sickness and want, and at the end of it killing. Your goods have been confiscated, and you yourself taken against your will to as depressing a refugee camp as I never hope to see again; to be carried away and exiled to some alien work regardless of whether or not you had ever actually done anything against the Jurisdiction."

Leaning back in his chair, Andrej counted his points off on the fingers of his left hand, wondering why he bothered. Plugrath would not be convinced. Still, he had asked. "I have given you a talking-drug, Lieutenant, you must to me answer fully and frankly. If I under such circumstances ask the model question would not every Nurail soul in this convoy answer in such a way as to incriminate themselves? Because surely it can be expected they have resentment. Should resentment be actionable?"

From all the reaction Plugrath showed him he might as well have been talking to himself. Plugrath seemed clearly unimpressed by this line of reasoning. On the other hand Plugrath hadn't asked to be persuaded, merely informed as to what explanation he should give if and when Bench Captain Vopalar asked him why Koscuisko's questions were not the ones Chilleau Judiciary wanted answered. TOP

"Thank you, sir. You elect a conservative approach, or what might otherwise be described as a liberal interpretation. Is that the reason you substituted the drug? If you don't mind my asking, sir."

Quite suddenly Andrej did mind, very much. He was tense to begin with, fearful with each new soul brought forward for interview that he would not be able to keep this one from the torture. Knowing the growing anticipation that he felt was fixed on the contrary goal, intent on having as many prisoners as possible, only too persuasively beguiled by the prospect of an entire prison full of souls to be subject to atrocious torment at his will.

"No, shasti is wrong for a Darset Nurail at this level. There's a side-effect that comes and goes, an intense—if artificial—desire to please. It can make a man agree to things he never really had to do with. Talfer is much safer. More reliable in its effect."

More than his personal conflict, more than the constant tension within him between his desire to keep souls safe from Inquiry and his consuming desire to have them scream for him, over and above these personal issues Andrej felt professional affront, pure and simple. He was Andrej Koscuisko, he held the Writ to Inquire, and although his Captain had set strict limits on the exercise thereof there had been sufficient practice over the years to convince Andrej that he knew more about what he was doing than any Bench Lieutenant—Command Branch or no—or Chilleau Judiciary either.

"I don't know how you keep it all straight, sir. With respect." Perhaps Lieutenant Plugrath had simply been curious. "I'm to attend mid-day briefing, sir. And will wait upon his Excellency once more upon completion."

Oh, then perhaps he would have a nap. But there were so many interrogatories to be got through. The more people he could clear here and now in transit the fewer would remain to be processed through the Domitt Prison. There was a consistent peculiarity that Andrej had noted on field exercises before: a man was much more likely to be treated as innocent absent good and convincing evidence to the contrary while he was not within prison walls. TOP

Once bring a man to prison—even unaccused, even only as a person of interest—and the presumption of guilt increased noticeably.

He didn't need to be greedy.

He could be certain—either bitterly so, or comfortably so—that the prison administration would have work enough for him, one way or the other.

"It was my second-rating in school, Lieutenant, psychoactive drugs, I mean to say. My respects to Captain and Primes, if it is appropriate to forward them second-hand. I will the next interrogatory start without you."

Plugrath saluted with crisp precision and left the room. Andrej tilted his chair back further—almost dangerously so, with the front legs well up off the ground—and stretched luxuriously. All alone for once. All alone for now. He could have a nap.

Then Code signaled at the door with a mealtray, and Andrej put all thoughts of everything that wasn't to eat out of his mind firmly.

There were priorities.

Right now midmeal was at the top of the list.

He might be having his last meal, should Captain Vopalar decide to take offense at his creative liberties with Chilleau Judiciary's interrogatories. TOP

Bench Captain Shinjosi Vopalar sat at her desktable with the latest scans from Chilleau Judiciary before her, and tapped her blunt finger against the flimsies irritably. "He's the Inquisitor, he should know from interrogatories," she reminded her junior Lieutenant, Plugrath, who stood at command-wait in the middle of the staff assembled for meeting. First Officer to her right. Chief Medical to her left, senior Security at the back of the room, and Engineering late as usual.

"And according to the Privilege of the Writ he can be as insubordinate as he likes and get away with it, as long as we can't cry mutiny against him. Editing a model interrogatory is just appropriate exercise of his professional judgment. Chilleau Judiciary is simply going to have to choke on it, they're the ones who sent him."

She didn't blame Koscuisko if he bridled at the model interrogatories, not really. There was a distasteful hint of a political agenda to the ones she'd reviewed; and if she thought there was a hint—she being a Bench officer—a Fleet officer, whose tolerance was much lower, was almost certain to smell a subordinated purpose.

That the Second Judge needed evidence to protect herself from criticism was well understood by all parties.

That the Second Judge would all but direct a Writ to obtain confession in specific form and detail was a violation of Protocol that would only get Chilleau Judiciary into more trouble if the issue were to be raised in public—by an irate Inquisitor, as an example.

Andrej Koscuisko seemed to be a touchy sort. It was probably better to leave him to his own devices as much as possible until he could be safely made over to the Domitt Prison.

"Very good, your Excellency. With respect, the Captain might wish to note that Koscuisko has refused all but two of the persons of interest interviewed this shift last. Amounting to twelve persons, in total." TOP

Vopalar suppressed a wince. She wasn't going to reverse herself in front of her young Lieutenant, but she had to admit—if only to herself—that the statistic was a discouraging one.

"He's the Judicial officer, he's not subject to independent audit. If it comes to that I expect he'll be asked to explain himself to the First Secretary at Chilleau Judiciary, but that's his problem, not ours. Anything else? Thank you, Lieutenant."

This was Plugrath's signal to leave; saluting, he did so. Vopalar waited for a moment after the door slid closed behind Plugrath's back, curious as to whether anyone would want to comment.

First Officer obliged.

"Well, we were trying to make sure no-one fell through the slatting. It's possible we pulled in so much ash with the ingots."

A point. There had definitely been a move on to deal severely with Eild for having put the Bench to so much trouble. "How many are there for Koscuisko to get through, First Officer? Assuming he's to review the preliminaries before we sign them over to the Domitt Prison."

First Officer was opening his mouth to answer, but her chief medical officer—Doctor Clontosh—interrupted before First Officer could speak.

"There are nearly four hundred souls on referral, your Excellency. But I was promised some of his time on rounds. If you remember, Captain."

That many? Ouch. Still, Koscuisko had gone through twelve in a shift, from Plugrath's report. Two shifts in a day, three if they pushed it. Twenty days left, that was theoretically four hundred and eighty souls interviewed, at a rough estimate. And rounds did need to be completed. TOP

"What do you suggest, Doctor?" Medical was understaffed. Medical was always understaffed. Vopalar was determined to do the best she could with what resources she had regardless. Being relocated was bad enough in and of itself without being made to suffer some wound or illness without so much as basic medical care during the transit to Rudistal.

"Half-shift a day, every day. If I can have half a shift I can keep things covered. He'd still have a shift and a half for interviews, more if he wanted." There were four shifts in a day, that was true enough. Generally divided into two duty shifts, one for personal time, and one's sleep-shift, but Koscuisko could easily borrow against personal training if it was important to him.

"That's not unreasonable." There was no particular requirement that she knew of for Koscuisko to complete his review of preliminaries prior to the arrival at Rudistal. Rounds were not the sort of thing that could be made to wait. "Doctor Clontosh, you have my authority to request Koscuisko's support for four eights a day, on rounds. He has any questions I'll be glad to tell him myself, but I don't think it'll come to that."

Koscuisko might be a little impetuous—his handling of that prisoner back on Eild proved as much. But he wasn't stupid. He was different from most Inquisitors that way. What limited gossip crossed service barriers between the Bench and Fleet indicated that Andrej Koscuisko was a genuine exception to the norm—a Ship's Inquisitor who hadn't ended up in that unenviable position for lack of any chance of a decent job anywhere else.

"Now. First Officer. What happened in Limited Secure while we were boarding? Do we know yet if we lost anybody we meant to keep hold of?" TOP

The displacement camp had been carefully segregated and secured, but it had nevertheless been basically one giant encampment on one large piece of level ground. Loading meant confusion, no matter how carefully controlled. There had been indications that prisoners had escaped from Limited Secure into the general passenger list under cover of one of several incidents during loading: but the numbers all seemed to add up.

It stretched the imagination a little past its point of maximum flexibility to imagine anyone substituting themselves for a prisoner from Limited Secure, when those political prisoners were for the Question from the start.

"All we know for certain is that we've got the right number of bodies, Captain," First Officer shrugged. "The transfer records are all pretty minimal. At this point, if we've got the wrong body, we can't tell, and if we can't tell, does it really matter?"

Well, of course it mattered. There was the reputation of her Command as a well-ordered Fleet, for one. But First Officer's point was a little to one side of that: if they couldn't tell, would anybody ever find them out?

It wasn't as though Koscuisko, or the Domitt Prison, was to lack for prisoners to interrogate.

"First Officer. You disgust me deeply. And I mean that as an official statement, strictly off the Record." But First Officer merely raised his eyebrows at her, clearly impervious to any such insincere criticism on her part. "Thanks, gentles, and we'll meet again tomorrow. Good-greeting to you."

Clontosh would get good service out of Koscuisko, whether or not Chilleau Judiciary was to gain any satisfaction from the man.

The honorable discharge of her duty—shepherding the Dramissoi Relocation Fleet to Rudistal—was all Sinjosi Vopalar really cared about. TOP

Last but not least, a short reaction shot as Captain Irshah Parmin announces Joslire's death to the bond-involuntary troops who remained on the Scylla when Andrej went off to the Domitt Prison.

Scylla had not carried a full complement of bond-involuntaries for as long as Captain Irshah Parmin had commanded. Bond-involuntaries were difficult to come by and difficult to maintain. He didn't even particularly want them, because what they were needed for was first and foremost supporting a Ship's Inquisitor in Secured Medical; and Captain Irshah Parmin disapproved in principle of Secured Medical and everything that went on there.

It was nothing personal.

Bond-involuntaries were elite troops, in a sense, because it took a superlative fighter to be able to bear up under the strains a bond-involuntary suffered and still do their duty.

The fact that he respected them only made it worse when he had to do something unpleasant.

Because Scylla was assigned only eleven of them there were few enough left on board that he could have them to his office for the news. They'd guess, of course.

They'd know there was a special reason for them to be called to the captain's office, when under normal circumstances they would never have reason to go there. They'd know it wasn't that something had happened to Koscuisko, because there'd be a formation in Infirmary, if that was it, and them asked in to be part of the sharing of information there. TOP

And they'd know it wasn't to do with Chief Samons, because it wouldn't be them called into command territory then but the other Warrants and the Ship's Primes, and if that had happened the rumor would have gone from one end of Scylla to the other already. Rumor was like that.

So the bond-involuntary troops left on board—Tonivish, Lorig, Vance, Ipner, Fiskka, and St. Clare—already knew that one of their fellow Bonds was dead.

Captain Irshah Parmin stood up from his desk as the First Officer reported, forming his detachment up on the plush carpeting between the desktable and the briefing pit. Attention-wait. Faces expressionless, and still somehow all too expressive; dread, fear, apprehension. Curiosity.

"Gentlemen, be at ease." Or as much at ease as a bond-involuntary could be in the presence of unfamiliar and superior rank. He wasn't really unfamiliar rank, he knew these people on sight, but it wasn't anything like as comfortable as they'd got with Koscuisko over the years.

In fact there had been more than one occasion on which Irshah Parmin would really have liked to take severe measures with Koscuisko and had been deterred by witnessing a quick word exchanged between the offending officer and one of the Bonds, or by some other reminder of the unusual relationship Koscuisko had developed with his people.

Bond-involuntaries were grudging with their trust and confidence. There was something there in Koscuisko that the bond-involuntaries valued, and Irshah Parmin had let his awareness of that fact balance out aggravation time and again. He trusted their judgment. Even when he didn't share their high opinion of Andrej Koscuisko.

"You will have guessed that there is news which concerns you. And that the news isn't pleasant news." Except that it was in a limited sense for one bond-involuntary at least. The best news, for the dead man, who could have had no idea of what the Captain was trying to accomplish for him and his surviving team-mates. That only made it worse: Joslire Curran was a free man, if a dead one, but had he lived for long enough— TOP

The Captain closed that stream off firmly. If any of them lived long enough they would be both free and alive to enjoy it. It was only a matter of relative degree. Maybe.

"It never gets any easier to say this. I'll put it to you straight. We've lost one of our crew, in an ambush at port Rudistal." Taking a deep breath, he tackled the worst of it, knowing that there was nothing he could do to ease the shock. "Joslire ise'Ilet has claimed the Day. He isn't Curran any longer."

Any name, no matter which, would hurt. Bond-involuntaries were very close with one another. It was a matter of necessity, a survival response. Joslire had been popular with his fellows in a severe restrained Emandisan sort of way. And Robert St. Clare had begun to weep, tears like the condensation of his grief glittering on his impassive face. There wasn't anything Irshah Parmin could do or say to comfort him, either.

"Erish Muat has been injured, but not critically, and they've gone on to their assignment. There'll be an investigation of the ambush, of course, but that isn't the point."

What was the point?

The point was that they'd lost a man, and while he was away from the ship as well. They hadn't even been there to say good-bye. No closure. No sense of making a good end. Only an abrupt snapping of a thread in braid, and a frayed cord where a strong support had once been there to be relied upon.

"I'll be announcing this to formation tomorrow. Take fourshifts to remember your dead. I'm sorry I don't have any more details for you, but that's what I have." He had to get them out of here. The sight of all that silent shock and suffering was almost more than he could take. "First Officer. If you would move your troops to gather-room. Dismissed." TOP

Robert St. Clare had come with Koscuisko and Curran—now ise'Ilet, once more—from Fleet Orientation Station Medical when Koscuisko had come to Scylla, and a little before he had been expected, too. There wasn't any way he could have sent St. Clare to the Domitt Prison. It wouldn't have been decent.

Yet if he had St. Clare would have been there to grieve for his fellow Bond when he had fallen.

And more than that.

They'd sent five-point-four in the first place because Joslire could manage Andrej Koscuisko on a drunk; Joslire, and Robert St. Clare.

Samons was alone in a prison with Koscuisko and a short team of Security, all of whom had suffered a ferocious loss. Koscuisko would be taking it personally. And Koscuisko was going to be drinking, because that was what Koscuisko did when he was in the middle of an Inquiry. Joslire dead, and St. Clare here in Scylla . . .

Calleigh Samons had her work cut out for her.

But even with Joslire Curran dead Captain Irshah Parmin could not settle his mind on anything but that it would have been an atrocious cruelty to send St. Clare to the Domitt Prison.

— End —

Notes

In the second part of these Mergau Noycannir scenes, there is a reaction shot to the ambush from Mergau's point of view, with predictable distortions of reality. I have a scene in which Andrej attempts to engage Goslin Plugrath's cooperation in getting some research that he wants done, and it's a delicate business, considering how Andrej has provoked Plugrath (scene starting on page 139 of the printed text of the novel). There will be the alternative version of the Verlaine scene printed at page 238 of the printed text of the novel, and the afore-mentioned scene in which Mergau Noycannir arrives in triumph only to have her expectations brutally disappointed once again.

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