Scenes from the Cutting Room Floor
Monolith and Captain's Mast
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Introduction

As Hour of Judgment opens, Andrej Koscuisko has been assigned to the Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok for almost four years. The experience has not been good either for him or for the prisoners referred to his custody on orders from Fleet Captain Lowden, a brutal and sadistic officer whose corruption is extreme even by the standards of a world in which physical torture is an accepted instrument of State.

Absent the interim novel that would place the situation in context for the reader, I wrote a pretty good chunk of expository material for the introductory pages of this novel to try to communicate how badly damaged Andrej Koscuisko has become, and how desperately he needs the support of his bond-involuntary troops and Security Chief Stildyne to maintain a borderline functionality.

It was good solid juicy character development and interaction, but it didn't have all that much to do with the immediate story . . . and my editor noticed (grin). So it came out.

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The Text

Andrej Koscuisko awoke to confusion in the stuffy twilight of a dimly-lit room.  Lying on his back, tangled in bedclothes, he stared at the ceiling in dread and dazed wonder for several moments before he realized that he wasn’t alone.

There was someone with him.

There was a monolith filling the doorway between the bedroom and the outer room.  A great grotesque statue made up of black horror, and Andrej tried to fathom what it might be, puzzling it out in fits and starts while he struggled with all of the other questions that had to be answered before he could go on.

A monolith, yes.  Between two rooms:  so there were two rooms there, but that told him nothing.  Senior ship’s officers had two rooms to live in.  So he was a senior ship’s officer, he knew that, but why should there be a monolith in quarters?  What manner of monolith would Engineering tolerate to stand in a doorway between rooms?  Wouldn’t it interfere with evacuation, to say nothing of normal traffic patterns? TOP

Oh, this was ridiculous, Andrej told himself, almost too disgusted at his own confusion to be afraid.  If the black monolith was friendly he could ask it for breakfast.  And if it wasn’t—if the black monolith was Vengeance incarnate, come for him finally after so many years spent wallowing in sin—then there would be no escaping it.

He had to get up.

He tried to move, but he was too thoroughly tangled in bedding to make much headway.  The black monolith stirred, finally, and started forward, coalescing from an ambiguous shadow of unknown intent into the familiar and friendly framework that housed the Nurail bond-involuntary Security troop, Robert St. Clare.

“I’ll help you with that, sir.  With your permission.”

With the doorway clear there was more light in the room, and Andrej could make more sense of what he saw.  The head of the sleepshelf was in the corner; he could look across the room, to his left, and see the sidetable next to the sleepshelf where he kept his lefrols and liquor, the open doorway into the next room, the half-open doorway into the washroom at the other end.  There were the storage closets along the back end of the room where his uniforms were kept, and the icon-table in the far corner.

His uniform was already arrayed in proper order on the valet-stand, waiting for him, but the light from the lamp on the icon-table was dim.  It was only enough to point up the sanctimoniously ghastly features of St. Andrej Filial Piety, after whom Andrej had been named.  It wasn’t enough to illuminate the ship’s mark on the front right shoulder of the uniform’s over-blouse.  No hope for a clue there.TOP

He still didn’t know where he was.

Robert stooped over him, calm and reassuring, working the wadded bedding free from the crevices into which Andrej had compacted it during the course of his uneasy sleep.  Robert was safe.  He trusted Robert.  He could ask.

“Who?”

His voice was a hoarse croak in his own ears.  Robert paused in his work of unpacking Andrej from the tangle he’d trapped himself in to take up a flask from the bedside table, holding it carefully for Andrej to drink.  It was tepid rhyti, but it was wet.  Andrej was grateful.

When the flask was empty he tried again.

“Where are we.  What’s going on.  What time is it.”  Who am I.  But he didn’t ask the last one.  He already knew some pieces of the answer, and there were good odds he’d have the rest of the information soon enough.

“The officer is Anders, son of Ilex.”  Robert’s voice was quiet and soothing, calming without condescending.  “Which is to say, sir, his Excellency, Andrej Ulexeievitch Koscuisko.  No offense, your Excellency.”TOP

None taken.  He and Robert had known each other for too long.  Not even the constraint imposed by Robert’s governor could damp the trust and confidence they had in one another:  and there was the fact that Robert’s governor had somehow never worked quite right, from the earliest Andrej had known him.

“Out with the rest of it, then, man.”  Unlike many of the souls under Jurisdiction, Robert hadn’t learned Standard until quite late in life—his seventeenth year, from what Andrej had gathered.  Robert had more of an accent accordingly.  It always tickled Andrej’s ear to hear Robert struggle to pronounce his name.  “I’m hungry.”

He was fully untangled from his bedclothes, now, and Robert helped Andrej to sit up on the side of the bed, crouching down beside him to steady him where he sat.  Robert was much taller than he was.  Their faces were still almost on a level.  Robert’s face had changed, in the years Andrej had known him; how many years was that?  When he had met Robert, Robert had been short of twenty years Standard, painfully young for the use to which Fleet had condemned him.  Robert did not wear a beard even now, since he had no Fleet exception to do so, and Nurail men from Robert’s particular clan-group only grew beards once they were married.  There was still no question but that Robert was a grown man, if a young man still.  His face had lost weight and gained gravity.

“Oh board of the Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok, as the officer please.  Fleet Captain Griers Verigson Lowden, commanding.”

Oh, it was bad, then.  Captain Lowden.  Burying his face in his hands Andrej rubbed at his forehead with his fingertips, trying to massage his brain through his skull.  He needed to think.

“And it’s just coming up on firstshift, which means you’re to sit at Mast in three eights.  There’s fastmeal.  Chief Stildyne will be wanting you for laps.”TOP

Chief Stildyne was always after him for his laps.  Andrej wasn’t interested:  but he knew that it was one of the things he relied upon to keep him going, to give his life order and meaning in the face of—what?

“And you’re to see Captain after Mast, there’s the Record to be endorsed.  Sir.”  Robert’s voice was careful and neutral, breaking only momentarily over the word “record” as he helped Andrej to his feet.  Yes.  That was right.  The Record.

It all came back to Andrej, the torture-work that was his life, the soul who lay constrained in agony in Secured Medical even now, the savage greed for pain that their Captain indulged so mercilessly in the name of the Judicial order.

He was Andrej Ulexeievitch Koscuisko, Ship’s Surgeon, Ship’s Inquisitor, on board of Jurisdiction Fleet Ship Ragnarok.  He was getting up and getting dressed because he had work to do, and because his fastmeal would get cold.

But there was more.

He had been Ship’s Surgeon for eight years, his term was to expire within two month’s time.

As long as it had been, as horrible as it had been, as many crimes as he had committed in the name of lawful duty, it was over.  He was going home.TOP

On his feet, now, Andrej patted Robert’s arm by way of thanks, and staggered off to the washroom under his own power.  Free.  Two months, and he was going home.

What was to become of Robert and the other bond-involuntary troops once left without protection, exposed to Captain Lowden’s whims by the uncaring indifference of the next Inquisitor assigned?

There was nothing he could do about that.

Andrej switched the wetshower to its coldest extreme and turned his face up full into its brutal blast to shut the voice of anguished impotence away in his mind.  Nothing he could do.  He had exhausted all of the options at his disposal, trying.  Best not to dwell on it.

He still had two more months to get through somehow before he could go home.TOP

Ralph Mendez presided over Ship’s Disciplinary Hearing once a week, whether he needed to or not.  As the senior Security officer on board it fell to him to review the periodic roster of offenses reported, violations committed, adjustments required in the day-to-day workings of a ship of war; and the Ragnarok—was not one.  No, the Ragnarok was an experimental ship still in the final stages of proving out its still-controversial black-hull technology and a sixteen atop thirty-two lesser innovations:  but there was discipline to be maintained all the same.  Ship’s First Officer, Ralph Manil Mendez, son and grandson of men so named, to sit in judgment.  Ship’s Inquisitor, Andrej Koscuisko, to weigh the penalty, because the only Bench officer on board was the Chief Medical Officer, and Koscuisko would be tasked with the administration of any corporal punishment deemed appropriate.  Or its delegation; but Koscuisko was selfish about the beatings, and held them all for himself.  Four years ago Mendez had supposed that was because Koscuisko had a particular taste for the work.  Koscuisko claimed that as his excuse still.

Mendez no longer quite believed him.

Six-and-sixty at Koscuisko’s hand was brutal, was ferocious punishment, but it was survivable—Mendez had seen that.  Six-and-sixty from anybody else was a death sentence.  Koscuisko knew what he was doing with a whip.

That was why the Bench had first mandated the restriction and ruled that only medical officers were to execute the Protocols.

Ship’s First, the Chief Medical Officer, and usually some representative from Command Branch sat at Ship’s Disciplinary Hearing to round out the panel.  Today it was the senior of two third lieutenants on board, Jennet ap Rhiannon, creche-bred, newly assigned, and a little impatient.  Koscuisko wasn’t quite arrived, not yet.

“We have—how many cases this morning, First Officer?” ap Rhiannon asked carefully, reaching across the table for the rack of cubes.  “Five?”

Creche-bred Command Branch.  A tricky piece of business, the third lieutenant, short, stocky, dark hair, full oval face, blue eyes.  More or less.  No nonsense about her, but she was polite; she hadn’t asked him why Koscuisko was late, not in so many words.  So far.TOP

Koscuisko was just now coming through the far doors into the senior mess room that served for this and other administrative functions between the four meals that the ship served daily.  It was early on in Koscuisko’s most recent interrogation, Mendez noted; Koscuisko still seemed fairly fresh and rested.  Clean linen was a universal restorative, and Koscuisko’s people took good care of him—as Koscuisko of them.

“My excuses, First Officer, I mean to say apologies.  I have overslept.  It is not Robert’s fault, he tried to wake me, and I believe I have locked him into the wardrobe.  Good-greeting, Lieutenant, ap Rhiannon I think?”

ap Rhiannon was on her feet, politely standing to attention for the entry of a superior officer.  Koscuisko nodded to her, climbing the low steps that separated the back end of the mess area on its raised platform from the more general area where the senior warrants and junior officers took their meals.  Yes, brisk and genial, and unless a man knew to look he could easily miss the fathomless pit of desperation behind Koscuisko’s pale eyes entirely.

“I hate it when that happens,” Mendez replied, to make conversation.  “Hope you remembered to let him out, Andrej, he’ll get a crick in his neck.  Well.”

Koscuisko took his seat to Mendez’ left, on the middle of the board.  ap Rhiannon waited till Koscuisko had settled himself to sit down.  Mendez caught ap Rhiannon’s gaze lingering on Koscuisko’s face as she sat, and suppressed a grin of recognition.  Yes, Koscuisko let his hair go out of Standard tolerance from time to time.  No, it wasn’t up to any Command Branch officer on board except for Captain Lowden himself to say anything to Koscuisko about it.TOP

“I saw Wheatfields in the corridor, First Officer, perhaps if we started in Engineering and got it out of the way?” Koscuisko suggested.

Naturally Koscuisko wanted Wheatfields well clear of the area before he left the room.  In the four years that Koscuisko had served on board of Ragnarok he had gradually developed a relationship of grudging mutual respect with the moody Chigan whose partner had been murdered by one of Koscuisko’s fellows so many years ago.  Wheatfields still had a tendency to knock Koscuisko into the nearest wall from time to time for no particular reason.  It was nothing personal.

Mendez nodded at the lieutenant.  She called out to the sergeant at arms, her voice clear and neutral—chilling, almost, in its professionalism.

“His Excellency, Serge of Wheatfields, Ship’s Engineer.  Willful disregard for standard repair procedures on status checks resulting in avoidable physical damage to the fabric of this ship.”

Ship’s Engineer had to duck his over-tall Chigan head to step into the room.  The accused came behind his senior officer under Security escort; a junior maintenance tech, pale but defiant.  Mendez had the scenario at once.  Wheatfields was past his patience, and wanted to make the point with the technician; who—to judge by his previous history at Mast—had an attention deficit disorder of some sort.

“Technician second class Hixson.  State your name, your identification, and the nature of the issue on which you have been called to answer.”TOP

Koscuisko’s turn.  Chief Medical knew the formal legal language cold, and could probably recite it in his sleep.  It should have given Hixson pause to realize that he was faced with the man who held the Writ to Inquire on Ragnarok.  Unfortunately Hixson did not seem to be impressed.

“Yes, your Excellency.  Sallie Hixson, as previously identified.  Gross structural components forward, carapace hull, thirdshift.  Sir.”  Hixson sounded bored:  careful enough to express all due respect, but beneath it all—as he finished his recitation—Hixson clearly was not convinced that what he’d done was all that important to the safety of the ship.

“Towards the end of duty shift two days ago this troop failed to complete items sixteen through twenty on pre-seal survey and failed to so note on documentation, falsely attesting to completion of task.  Bulkhead subsequently failed under random test, resulting in physical damage to fabric of ship.  Sir.”

Mendez could empathize, to a certain extent.  If Hixson had never served under fire he had no personal experience of catastrophic hull failure during a firefight.  Unfortunately there was no margin under Fleet protocols for learning the serious nature of a hull failure on the job:  a person was expected to take it as a given.

“Third offense,” Wheatfields reminded them, just in case they hadn’t noticed from the record.  “You’ll remember the conversation we had last time, Hixson?”

It was for Koscuisko to carry the inquiry forward, but Koscuisko prudently kept shut.  This had more to do with Engineering anyway.TOP

“Yes, your Excellency.”  Hixson had begun to sweat a little.  “But, ah, under the circumstances, sir.  No harm done, after all, no need for extreme sanctions.”

“I decide whether or not harm was done, Technician.” Mendez was impressed.  Wheatfields was angry.  “We were lucky.  You could have gotten someone killed.”  Wheatfields had been standing behind Hixson and his escort, while Hixson made his statement.  Now Wheatfields closed the distance between the accused and the Bar.  “You and I have had this conversation before and I’m tired of hearing excuses.  We agreed on assessment of penalty last time, Hixson.”

Mendez checked his ticket, casually.  Yes.  They had.  Wheatfields had waived his right to demand blood.  Hixson had promised it wouldn’t happen again.

“Yes, sir.  We did, sir.  Guilty as charged, sir.”

Not as if that would make a difference if Wheatfields had decided to give up on Hixson.  Ship’s Engineer was within his rights to summarily dismiss Hixson from duty in section on board of Ragnarok, forever.  That would mean reassignment for Hixson, under less than auspicious circumstances.  And Hixson had just about exhausted his issued ration of second chances before he’d even got to the Ragnarok.

Wheatfields turned around, away from Hixson, nose-to-nose with Koscuisko where he sat, leaning over the table from the other side.  Koscuisko did a good job of not looking startled.  “What’s my range, Chief Medical?”TOP

Technically speaking—once again—that was up to the Bench officer to decide.  Koscuisko just frowned a little, thinking.  “Couldn’t really see one-and-ten at this point, Serge.  You’re going to have to start at two-and-twenty.  It’ll take up to eight-and-eighty, depending on how dangerous the failure might hypothetically have been.  But that’s pushing it.”

Koscuisko spoke quietly, but it was a small room.  Still Hixson had been warned:  and if Hixson couldn’t quite believe that he could be put to death for faking a check-off list on an inspection chit he was a least beginning to think a little harder about why inspection chits were important.

“I want four-and-forty from the son of a bitch,” Wheatfields said firmly.  “It’s going to take four shifts to get structural integrity restored along that piece of wall.  But I want him back on duty before we make Burkhayden, too.”

“You’ll have to make due with three-and-thirty, then.”  Koscuisko’s voice was regretful, but firm—as if he wasn’t simply stating what Wheatfields had been after all along.  “Three-and-thirty, and I can see return to duty in five days.  Deal?”

Three-and-thirty was enough to get anyone’s attention, whether or not the Bench standard saw it the same way.  Mendez cleared his throat.  This was his Mast, after all, when it came down to it.

“All right.  Hixson, your senior officer has asked for three-and-thirty in consideration of the failure in duty you have acknowledged.  Chief Medical states five days are to be provided for recovery.”  If Hixson had been bond-involuntary, now, rather than a free man, Lowden would cut that recovery time in half as a matter of course.  “What’s your call?”

“Sir.  Chief Engineer is within his rights, sir, we had agreed.  Just and judicious that it should be so, First Officer, three-and-thirty prudent and proper as penalty.  Sir.”TOP

Maybe it would work.

Hixson wasn’t stupid.  He could interpret negotiation as well as anyone.  Wheatfields wanted to salvage him for the Ragnarok.  But Wheatfields was tired of making excuses for him.

“Let the Record show, then.  Thank you, gentles, return Hixson to duty-ward pending execution of penalty assessed.  Good-greeting, Serge.”

One down.

Four to go.

“Next.”

All fairly innocuous, especially after the first.  Brawling in common-room over an opprobrious name which might or might not have been spoken aloud.  Extra duty to be performed to balance out having evaded an assigned duty shift without taking adequate care to ensure that arrangements for coverage were honored. 

Sloppy cleaning in the recyclers in mess leading to the loss of a day’s run on one of the ration lines, no great loss as far as Mendez was concerned but rules were rules.  Extra maintenance for three weeks to be performed by one of Two’s people, caught napping on duty station after celebrating too hard over a co-worker’s promotion.  TOP

This was the daily stuff of discipline and punishment on a ship of war, and if it hadn’t been for the relatively unusual occurrence of Wheatfields’ invocation of corporal punishment Mendez could have slept through it himself and not felt any harm done.

“That’s it for today, then?” Koscuisko asked, gathering a set of disposition tickets into his left hand as he rose.  “I’ll take these to Captain, First Officer, I’m on the agenda anyway.  Lieutenant.”

ap Rhiannon stood in turn a little abruptly, as though surprised at Koscuisko’s relative informality.  She was new.  And creche-bred stood on their dignity far more frequently than even other Command Branch officers.  Mendez was perfectly comfortable with letting Koscuisko take the report forward:  he and Captain Lowden had years of negotiation between them, now, they had it down to a fine art.

“Captain will go with three-and-thirty, do you think?  Andrej?”

Captain Lowden was a relatively strict disciplinarian:  prior to Koscuisko’s arrival had been a ferociously strict, by-the-book assessor of the maximum available penalty for a given offense.  That was part of the negotiations between Koscuisko and the Captain that had nothing to do with any softening on Lowden’s part and everything to do with the alternative entertainment Koscuisko could offer down in Secured Medical to while away the long hours of Lowden’s usually uneventful days. 

Mendez knew it went on. 

He just didn’t want to know anything more about it, since there wasn’t anything he could do.TOP

“Good odds, First Officer, depending.  I think it’ll be all right.  Good-greeting, I’m late.”

The door at the far end of the room closed behind Koscuisko’s back.

Jennet ap Rhiannon sat back down.

Mendez waited, curious as to what she would say.

“There’s a prisoner in Secured Medical, First Officer.”  Interesting choice.  No question about why it was Ship’s First who asked Chief Medical about what decision the Captain would make on a disciplinary issue, rather than the other way around.  “This is the first time I’ve been assigned to a rated warship.  I’d like to have a look at what goes on, as long as there’s an Inquiry in process.”

She’d already been to Secured Medical to have a look, in fact—Mendez had Stildyne’s morning report.  But Secured Medical was just that:  secured.  Nobody went into Secured Medical without prior and explicit authorization from Chief Medical.

To her credit she hadn’t tried to bully her way past the bond-involuntary Security on watch over the prisoner.

“Surely they covered it in orientation, Lieutenant.”  That didn’t mean he had to make things easy for her.  It was bad enough that the Captain treated Koscuisko’s Judicial function as recreation.  There was no reason to tolerate any similar tendency in junior officers.  “What’s to see?”TOP

The lieutenant frowned.  “True, First Officer.  But I’ve been active now for four, five years.  And if I’m to be responsible, one day, I’d like to know what I’m to be responsible for.”

All right, maybe it wasn’t prurient interest, maybe it was a misplaced sense of responsibility.  “Best bet is to let Stildyne know, he can pass the word on to his officer.  I’ll tell Chief, Lieutenant.  Is that all?”

Koscuisko’s Chief of Security could find the best time to put her request before Koscuisko.  Koscuisko listened to Stildyne.  Koscuisko didn’t listen to lieutenants, Command Branch or no.  Koscuisko hardly listened to him, Ralph Mendez, and he was senior; it wasn’t insubordination, though, not really.  Captain Lowden simply kept Koscuisko strung out too taut to operate on anything more than a very basic level.

“Thank you, your Excellency.”

All right, then.  “Staff in two eights, Lieutenant, there’ll be visitors from the occupation fleet.  Bench intelligence specialists, no less.  You don’t want to miss it, see you there.”

She might have wanted to protest that she wouldn’t think of missing a command formation.  But she’d been dismissed.TOP

If Koscuisko got Lowden to accept so mild a punishment as three-and-thirty for Wheatfields’ technician it would be because Lowden expected to split the difference with the prisoner in Secured Medical—

None of his business.

And nothing he could do about it either way.

Ralph Mendez put the familiar resentment away and left the room to return to his office and prepare for staff in two eights.

— End —

Notes

Among the other "Scenes from the Cutting Room Floor" that contain information cut from Hour of Judgment, you might wish to pay attention to those containing scenes with the creche-bred Jennet ap Rhiannon. You can expect to be seeing a very great deal more of her, as well as the other (surviving) officers of the Ragnarok, in future UNDER JURISDICTION novels.

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